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Darth Vader | 5 | 55.56% | |
Stanza | 4 | 44.44% | |
Voters: 9. You may not vote on this poll |
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06-28-05, 11:47 PM | #46 | |
Banned: Biting
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IP: 3240 794D
Still Uppin All Th eunexplained votes will be removed lol
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06-29-05, 02:46 AM | #47 |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 591C A203
wow..... anyways, 4-2 now.........................
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06-29-05, 10:22 AM | #48 | |
FuxJustAWord
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This was feedback posted for Darth Vader
IP: 3B27 2020
viewin shit.......................................
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06-30-05, 08:24 AM | #49 |
Banned: Biting
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IP: 72CF CD95
Voted For: Stanza
Poetic faggot, your bound to get merked in this meeting N' fuck ya name yo this pussy can never stanza beating aight start Start fleeing yo, i've had it, the wack fuck can't hack it You won't steal a win ...that means you'll never amount to 'jack-shit' nice word-play That's it, over, and you got owned because of the beef I smack your mouth and feed ya your own fucking teath aight ending... 2 bar was ya witty's hit/wordplay the other was aight decent flow and all not a bad drop 7/10 Yo Only Way You Ever Get Wins Was when You Was Hangin Round Fans Ill Leave You Hanging From The Web ....Like My name was Spider Man decent start Oh You Couldnt Connect With Dail-up.... So You Got D Super Lost You Cant Hang With Me Man I Got A Rope..While You Got Dental Floss could of been worded better but decent Shabooyaka....You cant Handle The Heat So Get Off The Oven & Fry It Bcuz Im Known To Knock Wieght of The Watchers Like The Atkins Diet nice ending good punch... u had a witty punch and a decent punch decent wordplay, flow was proper and all i felt u had a edge on punches and wordplay which edge u out on the win good close battle 8/10 can ya return the favor of a vote i have the links in my sig.... * or i will have my vote removed * |
06-30-05, 08:25 AM | #50 |
Banned: Biting
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IP: 72CF CD95
can someone get silk flo vote removed that shit aint explained.....
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06-30-05, 01:45 PM | #51 | |
One Mic
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IP: 38B5 0CC0
Voted For: Stanza
yo, this is my honest opinion, stanza took this, i aint jus' sayin that cuz he voted my battle, thats my honest opinion. JTR/darth to be honest i wasnt really feelin your verse that much at all, the rhymes were simple in my eyes and basic. Poetic faggot, your bound to get merked in this meeting N' fuck ya name yo this pussy can never stanza beating Start fleeing yo, i've had it, the wack fuck can't hack it You won't steal a win ...that means you'll never amount to 'jack-shit' That's it, over, and you got owned because of the beef I smack your mouth and feed ya your own fucking teath it didnt seem like there was much thought gone into it, no metaphors or anythin. i've seen you do a lot better than this though. just put a lbit more depth into your punches and you'll be alright. it was alright verse though.your flow was alright though, didnt have too much of a problem witht that. 4/10. no hate btw, jus sayin it like i see it. Stanza- your verse had sum nice punches in it man, especiall your closer, Shabooyaka....You cant Handle The Heat So Get Off The Oven & Fry It Bcuz Im Known To Knock Wieght of The Watchers Like The Atkins Diet LOL, nice! 2nd line was a bit of self glorification, but it was still hot. your flow and structure was on point for most of it, fell off in a couple of places but it wasn't bad. yer it was just a nice verse overall, the onli thing i didnt like about it was the second line in the 1st bar, Ill Leave You Hanging From The Web ....Like My name was Spider Man that woz kinda played. overall it was a solid verse. 7/10 stanza gets my vote because he put a bit more depth and thought into his punches. darth, you had a nice flow, but the punches were just a bit basic. no hate, but stanza got this
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06-30-05, 02:00 PM | #52 |
Light Weight
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IP: 258C A279
Voted For: Stanza
Poetic faggot, your bound to get merked in this meeting N' fuck ya name yo this pussy can never stanza beating coo opener Start fleeing yo, i've had it, the wack fuck can't hack it You won't steal a win ...that means you'll never amount to 'jack-shit' boo.. That's it, over, and you got owned because of the beef I smack your mouth and feed ya your own fucking teath weak closer Only Way You Ever Get Wins Was when You Was Hangin Round Fans Ill Leave You Hanging From The Web ....Like My name was Spider Man weak opener Oh You Couldnt Connect With Dail-up.... So You Got D Super Lost You Cant Hang With Me Man I Got A Rope..While You Got Dental Floss average Shabooyaka....You cant Handle The Heat So Get Off The Oven & Fry It Bcuz Im Known To Knock Wieght of The Watchers Like The Atkins Diet coo closer this battle was aight here, not really hard punches from both opponents, both had decent structures, vocab needs some help, and the flow were pretty decent.. but since both of u had weak punches.. Stanza barely took this one for comin less-weak here.. RTF Stanza on my battle against Criminal or this vote gets removed Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
07-02-05, 12:48 AM | #53 |
QU3 M! D3$T!NO 3$ M! UN!CO 3N3M!GO
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This was feedback posted for Darth Vader
IP: 00A2 4ED0
checkin pollz ,,,,,,,,,,.....................,,,,,,,,,,,
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07-02-05, 11:00 AM | #54 | |
Banned: Biting
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IP: A4D8 4654
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07-02-05, 02:44 PM | #55 | |
aka'd
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
Voted For: Darth Vader
cool stanza, only good punch you had, was the closer, and it was still pretty weak...first two punches, nothing man....too basic, and not effective....calling yourself spider man? stupid....and the 'hanging' concept was pretty dumd...whats a rope going to do anyways? meta was really weak, and you had poor wordplay....elevate dude, no hate, but jack takes this one easily jack, nice shit man, i like the opener....creative, witty shit, and easily took this one....wasn't really fond of the closer though, didn't really go well with your two other punches, cause they were great, then you just had a okay punch, nah saying.....but overall, you took this with harder, more creative, effective punches....good opening personal off his name with wordplay....good, short verse man, keep up v/darth vader....RTF Possible crew vote removed. Blisss = Drakel, who is in The Establishment -strobe
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07-04-05, 11:44 AM | #56 | |
Banned: Biting
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IP: 3240 794D
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07-04-05, 02:51 PM | #57 | |
R.A.W Reality Has Began!!
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IP: CDA8 A0B5
HEy criminal....wot u talkin bout...........................
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07-04-05, 04:02 PM | #58 | |
Flyweight
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IP: EF60 770B
Voted For: Darth Vader
this was an ok battle Poetic faggot, your bound to get merked in this meeting N' fuck ya name yo this pussy can never stanza beating nice word play ok opener 7/10 Start fleeing yo, i've had it, the wack fuck can't hack it You won't steal a win ...that means you'll never amount to 'jack-shit' another good wordplay, but no real punchline That's it, over, and you got owned because of the beef I smack your mouth and feed ya your own fucking teath weak closing, i wasnt really feeling that, really a played out line basically an a ok verrse. no punchlines here. the wordplay was better than stanza's though. had a personal or two in there but nothin impressive ---------------------------- Only Way You Ever Get Wins Was when You Was Hangin Round Fans Ill Leave You Hanging From The Web ....Like My name was Spider Man i like that first line, but the second one was played out Oh You Couldnt Connect With Dail-up.... So You Got D Super Lost You Cant Hang With Me Man I Got A Rope..While You Got Dental Floss that aint a diss.... Shabooyaka....You cant Handle The Heat So Get Off The Oven & Fry It Bcuz Im Known To Knock Wieght of The Watchers Like The Atkins Diet weak wordplay, and that self hype shit dont make for good battling no punchlines, weaker personals and you really wasted yuor closing on a self hype line. much respect, keep elevating
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