Scars feedin pain I’m needin
water to quench this thirst I have
leanin on God to heal me fast.
If He don’t I’m fadin at last
witherin like a leaf without
a cast.
Help me not dry up and give
me strength to drink a sup.
Needin energy, not gettin any.
Lord punishin me for not representin
plenty of times I stumbled and
plenty of times I mislead, trying
to act like a Christian but falling instead.
Now I’m goin through torment, my
world going to crap
Quicker than I eva expected like sand
in a hourglass my life is rejected.
Tryin to live my life uncredited to anyone
anything I bet my life unselected
Lost everything I worked for, everything I loved
my life going down a hole and I’m digging up sod
Cryin to the Lord, help me outta this mess, I can’t
do it w/o you, I can’t pass this test
All a sudden the phone rings, on the other end a
legit deal is made, I got a job at a local arcade,
gonna make some dough in the right kinda way.
Call up my folks tellin what went down
My momma said she was prayin 4 my life to turn around
We all were cryin as I hung up the phone, I can pay my rent
and keep what I own!
I told God I would need his guidance but I would present myself
tell everybody how I recommited myself, got on with my life
and love through all else..recompense, nonsense I'm goin on
no more comment.

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3 nails + 1 cross = 4given
No matter how good you are there's always someone better.
I'm not the status quo stereotype you want me to be.

this was good, real good flow and structure, nice use of vocab, emotion, and imagery, keep it up

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Nice drop
good vocab
overall 6/10

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im not a rapper anymore,i elevated to a Lyricist
so no more Commercial Shit ima just come off Serious

VP [VS] Un-Fuck-Widable

Got a nice drop there hommie, Nice structure, Nice Vocab, I liked how you expressed your emotion through the lyrics, Good Job with that.. Over good shit.. I reat it at 8/10

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