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06-30-05, 12:53 PM
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the new generation of RV... sigh
IP: 20B2 DF4A
New hopes of rap music crystlizing at the top of the game's surface
New generations of emcees making the struggle seem worthless I've replied to many emcees hard work and strenuous labor I'm just estatic when i see that three or four of them return the favor Fake emcees that cant go a stanza without self glorification These are the people building the new Rap Verse foundation Searching for hours to find a decent person to do a collaboration Fagits dont realize rap is some sort of a moral obligation Nows the time to step up and fight agaist this infestation short,,, but i had to say something
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06-30-05, 02:32 PM
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IP: 20B2 DF4A
thhank you... uppin!
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06-30-05, 03:11 PM
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IP: B48F 5388
its good
overall 6/10
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06-30-05, 03:15 PM
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~*This Worldz A Sin So Why Hate Me For My Habits~*
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IP: 2029 97B3
lmfao yo this shits tripped out n also true! yo nice vocab this was a perfect lil piece your shyt was
8/10 nice shyt homie ~1~
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06-30-05, 03:28 PM
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IP: 6397 BE49
This was pretty good man... True as well... Lemme give you a piece of advice though, when you rap an uneven amount of lines it kills your flow... Other than that it was pretty much flawless... I give you an 8/10, since you needed one more line...
Check out my new OM called "Back at it", if you havent already... |
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06-30-05, 03:36 PM
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IP: 20B2 DF4A
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06-30-05, 03:37 PM
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IP: 8191 8B5F
Yo a nice piece here man, I liked reading it, Some truth in those word.. Good Structure as well Good Drop Hommie...
Return the Fav Hommie http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=197591
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06-30-05, 04:59 PM
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IP: 20B2 DF4A
ty for the feed everyone.. uppin for some more!
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06-30-05, 07:10 PM
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in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
yo kid....
nice to see you back, having a handle on your words  ....expressed nicely, emotion was good.....but what anxiety said, make your verse even, killed the flow, and a little of the enjoyment....wordbut keep up man, collab if you want to....just give me a topic 
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06-30-05, 08:02 PM
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IP: 20B2 DF4A
uppin this shit for some more feedback
... thanks kess lol
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06-30-05, 09:36 PM
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IP: 20B2 DF4A
uppiN this shit for some more feed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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07-01-05, 12:35 PM
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IP: 20B2 DF4A
uppin this for some more feedback!
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07-01-05, 05:43 PM
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Witness, 4 God, 4-Ever
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IP: 245A 1F1E
liked this man, as stated ^ a lot of truth in this, nice flow and vocab usage, keep it up.........please RTF on one of my om's, again nice job
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 i come from a time when you earned respect, for your rhyme and the way you made words connect, not the money that you made or the girls you sexed, a concept you obviously haven't heard of yet Mars Ill
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