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07-05-05, 08:03 PM | #16 | |||||
Not_Indeph
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up up up up up.
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07-05-05, 08:07 PM | #17 | ||||||
QU3 M! D3$T!NO 3$ M! UN!CO 3N3M!GO
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good overall verse i liked it nice openor and closer good imagery nie structure you got a good verse there
your whole verse was good thats all i gott say for real ovearll: 9/10 rtf and leave feed back in my open mic: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=198264 |
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