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07-12-05, 12:06 AM
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Flyweight
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opt1k vs Pair-A-Docks
IP: BBBD 91AB
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10 Lines... Due in 30 mins... No Dickriding... No Crew Votes... No Recycling... No Biting... ...good luck! Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 07-15-05 at 12:06 AM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
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07-12-05, 12:07 AM
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#2
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IP: BBBD 91AB
Pair-A-Docks has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-12-05 12:07 AM.
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07-12-05, 12:09 AM
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#3
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IP: D40E 67D5
opt1k has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-12-05 12:09 AM.
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07-12-05, 12:15 AM
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#4
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Flyweight
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IP: BBBD 91AB
I wanted a battle that would get me respect...this is not it...
I am battling a kid...who can't see shit that's why he'sd opt1k... How you gonna type when ya can't kid....consider yaself tarnished kid... I would say there's still hope...but you're just to retarted to win... Man I hope that you don't think that any of your flows are dope... We all want ya dead....so we'll let hangman show you da ropes... Man this kids softer than eggs man.....and that's a breakfast food... Man you ain't shit....watch how my rhymes lyrically wreck this dude... Every script you have ever written have all been hollowed n played... I would feel heat from this little faggot....if I even swallowed his greandes! |
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07-12-05, 12:17 AM
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Above Originality
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IP: D40E 67D5
nigga i hold it down for the crazy bitchez
just like ur moms gettin pussy stitchez poppin at ya nigga cuz you a straight fool after i finished ur moms all of a sudden came you.... claimin u 15-2 on the net nigga rip oppenents apart and break necks tell you what homie just leave now cuz i know if u continue u gon bite my style mister i-am-15-2-on the net just move out the line homie...haha....NEXT!!!!!!!!  pair-1-docks just got his body full of gunshots  
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07-12-05, 12:17 AM
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Above Originality
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IP: D40E 67D5
nigga i hold it down for the crazy bitchez
just like ur moms gettin pussy stitchez poppin at ya nigga cuz you a straight fool after i finished ur moms all of a sudden came you.... claimin u 15-2 on the net nigga rip oppenents apart and break necks tell you what homie just leave now cuz i know if u continue u gon bite my style mister i-am-15-2-on the net just move out the line homie...haha....NEXT!!!!!!!! pair-1-docks just got his body full of gunshots __________________ I put thoughts to a melody Most catz dont belive in me But now look people im still standin cuzi aint givin up i was born 2 b rappin.
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07-12-05, 12:21 AM
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Above Originality
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IP: D40E 67D5
come on people vote homies!!!!!!!!!for reals!!!!!!!!!!
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07-12-05, 11:00 AM
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Flyweight
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IP: 4CF9 5876
uppin for more votes
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07-12-05, 11:12 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 16D6 1E74
Voted For: Pair-A-Docks
"just like ur moms gettin pussy stitchez" that don't make any fucking sense nigga...change yo shit |
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07-12-05, 01:30 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: 4CF9 5876
thanx and dammit people votye please
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07-12-05, 02:11 PM
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#12
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New to RV
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IP: 31D6 A726
Voted For: Pair-A-Docks
Damn, Both verses sucked ass!! The punchlines were barely there and no metas or similies in sight! open: Docks [was below average but at least attempted a puncline] close: Docks [a good comparison, not enough to be a metaphor in my book tho] personals: Docks [he used his name and tried to reverse it into a punchline metas: None punches: Docks [he had about two punchlines, but Opt1k had none] multis: None Both could greatly improve and Opt1k, add punchlines, metaphors and a few personals in your verse instead of running off a lot fo bullshit.
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07-12-05, 03:02 PM
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#13
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Flyweight
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IP: 586C 51F4
Voted For: Pair-A-Docks
Pair A Docks. He dissed better and had better structure. |
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07-12-05, 05:18 PM
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The Rise
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IP: DDE7 EADB
Voted For: Pair-A-Docks
um...do i have to explain...its obvious that this battle was wack but paiadocks got it....punches,flow,structure,vocab,opener,closer,m etaphors vote-Pair-A-Docks RTF in sig |
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