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07-12-05, 12:01 AM | #1 | |||||||
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.:Before I Go:.
IP: 31D6 A726
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Verse 1 I stand to be judged, will the defendant rise under god's eyes, flex and sigh to exercise and rest my mind to place this wreck a side hence the pride, so i grin as i'm sentensized my time to exit life, but i never ment to ride hancuffed, chained, thrown in hell and left to die never whent inside and found the means to fight like i tucked and rolled my shit between my tighs cause i'll be left seperated from my soul in withdrawl crystalized like frozen lungs after a being rolled in menthol studied from spine to my skull to find the reason for all of the shit that's roaming my brains shadowy halls with the machetes and barrels set on the table rolled steady through ghettos to blaze the disabled bitches, thugs, and sluts, since no could ever handle this cause the years never bring back the wifes and strangled kids Hook x2 Before i go, sent away from you i never knew the things i decided to do would put you in the things you whent through so before i go, i never ment to do this to you Verse 2 As i walk into hell, i watch my mother tears roll deep and i feel god's prayer as he touches me but won't speak cause i'm waitin' for satan to drop in his warriors to guide me through hell's dark and deadly corridors into the devil's throne with his servants dwelling the crossroads and the stentch of death feeds evil as it reaches my nostrils sat down and unchained to be replaced by belts from all angles wrapped by the wrist, strapped and held from both ankles and i can hear the preast spread the word leave his last blessing the guy at the switch twitchin his hand to leave my ass guessin and i can feel the volts surge through my bones and marrow satan's just blown a rebel, nerves crack and get thrown, then settle cause the day i was born, hell got it's back torn and shred since i fell with devil, leaped, ripped off his horns and said i'm meeting with you now and i'll be here my last day cause life's a book and looks like he just ripped my last page Hook x2 Before i go, sent away from you i never knew the things i decided to do would put you in the things you whent through so before i go, i never ment to do this to you
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07-12-05, 12:39 AM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: 31D6 A726
thanks for the feedback man, anymore feed?
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07-12-05, 09:32 AM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: 31D6 A726
upiin' on feed...
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07-12-05, 11:40 AM | #5 | ||||
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IP: 7425 1922
this was good, liked the flow, the emotion and vocab were good also, imagery was ok, keep it up
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07-12-05, 12:36 PM | #6 | |||||||
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IP: 31D6 A726
thanks for the feed....
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07-12-05, 01:58 PM | #7 | ||||||
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IP: CF74 5D3A
yeah had flow and emotions for real kid liked this good read really like verse one much better than two it just me
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07-12-05, 02:19 PM | #8 | |||||||
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IP: 31D6 A726
thanks for returning the favor mad, anymore feed?
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07-14-05, 07:47 PM | #9 | ||||||
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IP: 72AA 464B
Yo. on the real. this was Tite.... Good flow. Rhyming and a good hook... you got mad talent. I write songs to so you ever need another rapper. Hit me up... Keep it real b
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07-14-05, 11:43 PM | #10 | |||||||
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IP: 0522 9CD1
Aight, thanks stique, i'll keep that in mind, anymore feed?
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07-15-05, 12:14 AM | #11 | ||||||
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IP: CF74 5D3A
I’m a driver fast and bazaar in a fiberglass car got class
Learn about pivoting to earn a living and dump the trash Quick with knife because I’m sick of life will cut a slut Feel used up and now deals corrupt with gambling but Handling money, too much persuasion in such occasions my link (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=199778) Last edited by MADDRAPPER : 07-15-05 at 12:18 AM. Reason: ad my link |
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07-15-05, 02:13 AM | #12 | |||||||
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IP: 76FD 3C28
Aye son you got Talent fam keep that shit tight man Crazy desriptions. You got a gift use it!!! Holla at cha boy
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07-15-05, 03:23 PM | #13 | |||||||
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IP: EAD0 C432
thanks for that mad...thanks livin legend.
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07-16-05, 06:01 AM | #14 | |||
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IP: A181 D033
Yo i thought this was a decent piece for real. nice structure. good use of vocab and imagery.
there was a lot of emotion in this piece. good work fam keep it up. |
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07-16-05, 01:35 PM | #15 | |||||||
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IP: D6D7 B7E8
thanks for the feed soulja....will do homie.
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