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07-18-05, 11:18 AM
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~*Come Back*~ First R&B song
IP: 453C CBF2
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=200517
{Verse 1} Universal emotion called love bonded us spiritually Losing your love was not a rewarding experience Doubt and hurting on my face wasn’t mysterious Got take it serious because there is no other way Can’t live another day without you in my arms {Door to Chorus} Another night goes by without you by my side You’re dressed in all of me usually but now I cry It’s hurting so badly not even hanging by a thread Hurting cuz I got to live with our love being dead {Chorus} I can’t go back to you as long as god is saying no I never wanted to leave but my conscience says go Through out my days you and me I thought of that Dreaming thinking and wishing you would come back {Verse 2} Falling in love losing you is like losing your life I seen my wife leave slowly now you left me so lonely Pure love is what you showed me but why is it gone We could have live together and even had a son I can’t understand why you wouldn’t want that with ya {Door To Chorus} I can’t go another night without you by my side You’re dressed in all of me usually but now I cry It’s hurting so badly not even hanging by a thread Hurting cuz I got to live with our love being dead {Chorus} I can’t go back to you as long as god is saying no I never wanted to leave but my conscience says go Through out my days you and me I thought of that Dreaming thinking and wishing you would come back
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07-18-05, 11:23 AM
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IP: 453C CBF2
Now Uppin. I want feed. I'll RTF.....
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07-18-05, 11:32 AM
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IP: 453C CBF2
yay. thanx.. now I want more.
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07-18-05, 11:53 AM
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IP: 2FC8 5F46
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^^^Lol!^^^^ It was aiight,sorta gets corny at times... But it was nice how you played out tha darker side of romance! i like this line"Falling in love losing you is like losing your life I seen my wife leave slowly now you left me so lonely are you talkin bout your future wife walkin out tha door or just ur wife 4real. either way I like that... I give you 8.3/10...because I would like ta here how tha notes where dropped!  |
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07-18-05, 11:58 AM
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IP: 453C CBF2
heh. naw future wife. but uppin.
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07-18-05, 12:49 PM
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IP: CF74 5D3A
all this stuff is played just bits and pieces from other songs come on bring something new to the table are you able to do that like you sid about script this uck because its not original (NOW TELL ME WHY MY POEM SUCKS)
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07-18-05, 01:56 PM
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IP: 453C CBF2
keep out my dope threa an go back to your wack threads.
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07-18-05, 05:16 PM
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~Real Rookie Of The Year~
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IP: 1D91 FE8A
It was hot if you ever wanna do a remix to this hit me up but yo this was great I liked the emotion how you sort of like said the words you were sayin to her it was like I was thier this overall gets a 8.5/10!
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07-19-05, 11:30 AM
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IP: 9AA7 03B7
heh. I guess. uppin..
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07-20-05, 09:24 AM
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Ill Nigga Alert.
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IP: 3240 794D
Nice drop manye.....had a good concept...had some nice chorus to go along with it all...rhymes were good...overall-8.5/10....Pure dope i thought...keep up the good work manye....
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07-21-05, 10:56 AM
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IP: 3440 A6FA
why thank you.. now I want more.
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07-31-05, 03:38 AM
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IP: 93A9 B1A4
uppin this shit,.,.
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08-01-05, 12:54 AM
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IP: D8B2 7902
good drop man, emotion and imagery were very good, vocab was good, was really feelin the first verse and hook, keep it up man..........
.........links in sig, again good job
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08-01-05, 02:34 PM
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IP: 0FCC B386
nice. thanx. hey view my other one.
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