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Old 07-19-05, 05:58 PM   #1
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what up this is a track i did from the point of view of myself in a live battle check it.....



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Old 07-19-05, 05:59 PM   #2
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Old 07-19-05, 07:06 PM   #3
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ight i'm feeling the beat, where's it from?... ight u come in... umm vocals are kinda low. so its hard to hear u, flow is ight. emotion is meh, needs a bit of improvement.. lyrics ight decent. is there 2 guys on this or you agen this sounds different the voice sounds more clear emotion is ight on this bit lyrics are the same, ye man this is a nice song like it.. keep droppin em man
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Old 07-19-05, 07:08 PM   #4
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its all me and the beat is from pure bliss productions
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Old 07-20-05, 01:16 PM   #5
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uppin this track
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Old 07-20-05, 02:18 PM   #6
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beat is coo...voice is coo.....need to work on your delivery and emotion some man...flow is ok....could use improvement in a couple parts.......hook...ehh im not really feelin it much...work on your breath control a lil....i can hear you takin deep breaths after every couple words....

overall its not a bad track....add some effects to the hook...make it different from the verses...

please leave feed on.....The Perfect Woman...thanks
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Old 07-20-05, 03:51 PM   #7
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aiiight


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Old 07-20-05, 05:05 PM   #8
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yo..is this the traidmarx that used to be on u.f..??

anyway..beat is cool..
vocals are really low man..it takes away from the track..
flow an emotion is pretty good..this is a better than decent track here fam's..

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Old 07-20-05, 05:07 PM   #9
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yea this is the traidmarx from uf... that was a while back but yea thats me
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