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08-04-05, 03:40 PM | #1 | |||
Apollyon
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hot 16......
IP: 3240 794D
check it
i know whats a smart move, my soul is so artfull sowin my hearts wounds, thru flowin on parchment brew me a mosh pit-and ill bruise u a bargain slew u wit carnage-like i knew u at carthage …the true u is harmless, test me and die quick when my eyes twitch, i'll eat u alive bitch ur close to being brokin in two, so get open and lose what chu hopin to prove, i'll leave u soakin in pools so what is what, slicin ur face is my only uppercut u butterscotch, soft and sweet, lodged in a brothers gut ud be left from me beatin, meet my intestine for speakin cuz just like a recipe... u were meant to be eatin so respect me or treason, will be the charge dat ur fed plus all ur thoughts stink, like u fart in ur head i asked for susbstance, and u gave a morsil of bread so fuck what u said,.. i ate ur torso instead gotta work to be best, i know it herts like a wreck so small a girl could reach for ur dick, but end up jerkin ur neck dont think of me in RV, think of my hert and what i'm worth when i sweat and know, im the worst to expect when u reseachin a vet! so whats ur purpose my friend... i write verses in pen ur immersed in worthless garbage and can hardly pretend so stop wit the shity noise, equiped to leave u stiff when im hitting joints this city boys "black thought's" will flip u over the "tipping point" dont make me criss cross ur stichs, let u leak out ur biskit my motto is live long and spit it, so bring out,Da Bitchs! u worn like a monks shoe, or torn like a punks shute so when u say u dropin shit, i know u dont even want to u drippin and droolin, my mission is movement while im spittin abusive, ur written is stagnant so i grip u wit rap text, like a fish in a dragnet ur a clown wit a sad rep, so bounce, like a bad check jus want feed bitchs... dont let the next rhyme i write be about u... -Prodigy-of Mobb Deep ----------------------------------------------- http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2343099
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08-04-05, 03:53 PM | #2 | |||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 0825 899A
structure was fucked didnt kow where u were goin wit this, multis were iight vocab was iffy...not bad though 6/10 keep it up and rtf on my om and give real feedback please
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08-04-05, 04:14 PM | #3 | |||||||
the medicine man
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IP: 66CC 3CD6
gotta work to be best, i know it herts like a wreck
so small a girl could reach for ur dick, but end up jerkin ur neck favorite line like the multis alot, seems to be your specialty no topic matter but who cares? its called hot 16............ sounds like you were talking bout some one.......... structure was fine... no need to waste too many punches here though good verse |
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08-04-05, 04:36 PM | #4 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: 403D 72A8
ur close to being brokin in two, so get open and lose
what chu hopin to prove, i'll leave u soakin in pools so what is what, slicin ur face is my only uppercut u butterscotch, soft and sweet, lodged in a brothers gut ^^^ liked those lines alot the structure was decent i caught the flow fine and i like the way you mold your wordz
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08-06-05, 09:37 AM | #5 | ||||
Flyweight
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IP: D45D 842D
straight even though it was pointless i like the flow of it
definitely the jerkin ya neck joint was the best
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08-07-05, 02:09 PM | #6 | |||
Apollyon
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IP: 28AD 5545
upin................................
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