i think i get what he's sayin tho... meh, its koo, at least he attempted at explaining it... i know some ppl that just vote ya know? thanx pp2

Voted For: DoContinue

ur fit to be tied down to a loss like tragedys that happen
we aint showin u the ropes when we say DoKnotContinue rapping
^^coulda been waaaaay better
u aint ghost writing shit for vets like me. recognize the tight sound
cuz the only D.C. we go to for lines will be a visit to the white house
^^^ok............
ur a fuckin herb. its true no one can fill yah socks kid
shit ive heard better raps from andy milanokis
^^Basic similie......
u aint cockin guns. AK's aint fuckin with me yep
cuz u rockin more blanks than dumb kids on SAT tests
^^OK...but SAT lines are a little played

OK verse.HAd an ight rhyme sheme.AT least it wasn't that basic.Punches lacked at some points.1st bar could been way better if worded better.2nd. line lacked hard hittin punch...but a good multi.3rd bar was too basic.ANd 4th was a lil played.

this nigga's a fake threat, I'll Jay Vets, know why?
Untuck gats like nun-chucks, we'll see you Jet, L.I.
^^NO...set up bad..and punch sucked
seriously mayne,you couldnt fight my initials,you hearin this,lame?
DC'll SNIPE a nigga, you must be L.iterally I.nsane
^^OK..but uncreative
mockin this man, he do audio? the L.I.sp is tired bitch
is this Bwova fo WHEEL? go back into wi-TIRE-ment
^^Best line.....
couldnt stay outta tha league, so next week i'll make this gay pay hell
he'll neva MURDER... thas why Mr. I. signed outta K.L.L.
^^OK....

You came pretty weak here.BAsic rhyme shceme.1st bar was a horrible opener.2nd bar was OK...but uncreative.3rd was nice...lisp..then talking like it.BEst line here.4th bar was meh.Weak battle..but ya got it for the lisp line.

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Voted For: L.I.

this nigga's a fake threat, I'll Jay Vets, know why?
Untuck gats like nun-chucks, we'll see you Jet, L.I.

OK, PRETTY DECENT OPENER, BASIC RHYMING.

seriously mayne,you couldnt fight my initials,you hearin this,lame?
DC'll SNIPE a nigga, you must be L.iterally I.nsane

UMM, OK NAMEPLAY BUT PUNCH WAS WEAK.

mockin this man, he do audio? the L.I.sp is tired bitch
is this Bwova fo WHEEL? go back into wi-TIRE-ment

BASIC PUNCH, BUT GOOD WORDPLAY AND PERSONAL.

couldnt stay outta tha league, so next week i'll make this gay pay hell
he'll neva MURDER... thas why Mr. I. signed outta K.L.L.

YOUR BEST BAR, CREATIVE PERSONAL AND GOOD QORDPLAY, NICE ONE!

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ur fit to be tied down to a loss like tragedys that happen
we aint showin u the ropes when we say DoKnotContinue rapping

GOOD WORDPLAY AND NICE NAMEPLAY, DECENT OPENER.

u aint ghost writing shit for vets like me. recognize the tight sound
cuz the only D.C. we go to for lines will be a visit to the white house

AN OK PUNCH, KINDA CREATIVE AND IT HIT.

ur a fuckin herb. its true no one can fill yah socks kid
shit ive heard better raps from andy milanokis

I SUPPOSE IT HIT BUT THIS WAS WAYYYYY TO BASIC.

u aint cockin guns. AK's aint fuckin with me yep
cuz u rockin more blanks than dumb kids on SAT tests

HAHAHA, CREATIVE CLOSER...GOOD SHITS.

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LI CAME WEAK HERE IMO,

I THOUGHT IHE WOULDA TOOK IT EASY BUT IT TURNED OUT TO BA A GOOD BATTLE.

IT WAS CLOSE AS BOTH VERSES WERE INCONSISTANT WITH SOLID PUNCHES.

BOTH CLOSERS ON EACH VERSE WERE STRAIGHT FIRE TOO.

AFTER RE-READIN THE VERSES IMA GO WIT LI BY A HAIR FOR HAVING STRONGER NAMEPLAY.

YOURS WAS AIGHT DC BUT THEY DIDNT HIT AS HARD....ALSO FIX YOUR STRUCTURE UP.

NO HATE

RTF IN SIG SO I DONT HAVE TO REMOVE THIS!!

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Voted For: L.I.

Pretty Tight Battle, But L.I Came Harder With more Effective Punches.. yah Both had good Sturucture and Flow, And aight Personals, But L.I's Punches Weighed Heavier agaist
DoContinue's witch in Turn to the win in my eyes..

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Voted For: L.I.

DoContinue:
this nigga's a fake threat, I'll Jay Vets, know why?
Untuck gats like nun-chucks, we'll see you Jet, L.I.

vs

L.I.
ur fit to be tied down to a loss like tragedys that happen
we aint showin u the ropes when we say DoKnotContinue rapping
u aint ghost writing shit for vets like me. recognize the tight sound
cuz the only D.C. we go to for lines will be a visit to the white house
u aint cockin guns. AK's aint fuckin with me yep
cuz u rockin more blanks than dumb kids on SAT tests


v/L.I better punches, good wordplay, I've seen better from you... this is Mel

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Voted For: DoContinue

ur fit to be tied down to a loss like tragedys that happen
we aint showin u the ropes when we say DoKnotContinue rapping
^^^coulda made a better play off his name man....but it's ight...5/10
u aint ghost writing shit for vets like me. recognize the tight sound
cuz the only D.C. we go to for lines will be a visit to the white house
^^didn't rhyme well.....ight punch....5/10
ur a fuckin herb. its true no one can fill yah socks kid
shit ive heard better raps from andy milanokis
^^basic ........3/10
u aint cockin guns. AK's aint fuckin with me yep
cuz u rockin more blanks than dumb kids on SAT tests
^^basic...........2/10

OK...your verse got worse and worse as ut went.The first bar with the DOknot Continue rapping was ight...but coulda been better.The 2nd was ight punch but didn't rhyme well.3rd was basic.4th was even more basic.You can't just say "i heard better from andy watever" and expect to get positive reactions.

this nigga's a fake threat, I'll Jay Vets, know why?
Untuck gats like nun-chucks, we'll see you Jet, L.I.
^^not much of a punch....1/10
seriously mayne,you couldnt fight my initials,you hearin this,lame?
DC'll SNIPE a nigga, you must be L.iterally I.nsane
^^Good...4/10
mockin this man, he do audio? the L.I.sp is tired bitch
is this Bwova fo WHEEL? go back into wi-TIRE-ment
^^this was dope..Lisp..wi-tire....9/10
couldnt stay outta tha league, so next week i'll make this gay pay hell
he'll neva MURDER... thas why Mr. I. signed outta K.L.L.
^^Ok....5/10

Ok...1st bar was whack as fuck.2nd was mediocre...but that 3rd bar was dope.Complexity and creativity at best.
Flow was choppy at times.Set-ups could use some improvement...but you got this battle easy.

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*ups battle!!!!*

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Voted For: DoContinue

ur fit to be tied down to a loss like tragedys that happen
we aint showin u the ropes when we say DoKnotContinue rapping
7.....good punch...
u aint ghost writing shit for vets like me. recognize the tight sound
cuz the only D.C. we go to for lines will be a visit to the white house
6....ok
ur a fuckin herb. its true no one can fill yah socks kid
shit ive heard better raps from andy milanokis
3...nah...i ain't like this one
u aint cockin guns. AK's aint fuckin with me yep
cuz u rockin more blanks than dumb kids on SAT tests
2...played concept

this nigga's a fake threat, I'll Jay Vets, know why?
Untuck gats like nun-chucks, we'll see you Jet, L.I.
5...decent
seriously mayne,you couldnt fight my initials,you hearin this,lame?
DC'll SNIPE a nigga, you must be L.iterally I.nsane
3..weak...just cuz the startin letters spell his name don't make it a personal or nutin
mockin this man, he do audio? the L.I.sp is tired bitch
is this Bwova fo WHEEL? go back into wi-TIRE-ment
7......nice
couldnt stay outta tha league, so next week i'll make this gay pay hell
he'll neva MURDER... thas why Mr. I. signed outta K.L.L.
6....good...

This was a real close battle here.But..Docuntinue got this.

L.I...I thought those 2 bars you started off with were good.But the others after sucked man.Like ...that 3rd bar...you just stated andy mila w/e...got better raps than him..and just statin shit is a no....unless it's a personal..which it wasn't.And that last bar..with the SAt shit...played as fuck.

Vote-Docontinue.
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