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09-11-05, 01:21 PM
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I agree the hook kind of messed up the whole song. Other than that it was good, you had some good vocab in here. Than your strucure was decent you had a few strechted lines here and there that messd up the flow so work on that but overall this was a good piece
please leave return the favor http://community.rapverse.com/showt...120#post2431120 Last edited by Justice : 09-11-05 at 01:31 PM. |
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