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09-14-05, 06:34 AM | #1 | |||||
The Topical Juggernaut
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Hateful Lover (Drop)
IP: D35B 3F85
Carnage again, Engulfed Nations of Men… Sin, Greed and Power… The deadly mix that’s always able ta’ crush Towers in Blight Only 200 years after the last Battle of Neighbors took Flight But this time it was Fought with only Two Men in One Night… First, let’s take a simple History Leason: this man we’ll call ‘Blademasta’ Profession’ Intense with Aggression, The Best ta’ the Fullest…No man was even close ta’ his Level No one but: ‘Stone Face, the Devil’ a.k.a. ‘The Nemesis’…Soul of Liquid Metal… Now, Blademasta’ had Heart, Illest with his Sword of the Valiant Created in Forges with Supernatural Torches and Talent No man could Contend, where his Blade cut air…Death settled in Lightly Held in forms similar to an Emcee with-his-Pen His Grace was Unequaled, Uniform in his Stances Top Notch with his Sword… His constant Companion… Twenty-Five Days Journey East leads us to one also called: ‘The Beast’ Nemesis also had Talent but Corrupted he was Chained to a Leash No need for a Sword he had Strength neva’ Imagined Psychic Abilities, on top of that he was Built like a Savage He taught himself Discipline until finally they Freed him, He’d Neva’ be Owned again Survival settled in, he Trained and Performed with the Best of them Studied the ways of Power…and soon it Congested him, Twisted and Molested him… Evil right Down to his Core, Forever Seeking the Battle that he knew was in Store… Two Nations Sought destruction of the other, No more room for one another Hatred boiled Over, Consumed each Alike, Only one thing Remained…. A Fierce Battle for Rights. Wars Engulfed Cities, killed Millions and Corroded Only one Solution remained to be Noted… Each side Chose its best so they Voted The City of Light, Gold and Perfection, Chose one Combatant: ‘Blademasta Profession’ The other neva’ even got ta’ Pick theirs, Nemesis Lunged and Engaged in Warfare The Battle begins, Sword Sparks Collide with Brain Waves Magical Winds Surgical Hits ta’ Nemesis but his Skin Immaculately Mends Caught off Guard, Blademasta’s Knocked back with Livid Scorches Invisible Forces Cut Flesh like Blow Torches Bent Back his Hand Snaps but Incredibly he’s still a Fortress… Now on the Offense, He lunges with Thoughts of Corpses Swiftly with the Mental Nemesis Counters the Next move Jumps ta’ the Right and Executes with Molten rock Plumes Cascades of Earth suddenly Surround the Swordsmen, This Battle is over unless he can counter with More then… He realizes a Weak Spot and in an Instant he’s back in Shocked from the Volley he Throws blow after blow-at-him Moves from one Stance to anotha’ like Liquid Death… he Discovers Nemesis is Cut Clean in two, Surrounded in Crimson Hue he Created on others… He drops to the ground and Instantly gone, he neva’ Suffered… War fought and ended in Night’s Glimmering Blanket Destiny Changed with one Sword and the Man that Made it. This is fairly old, but just recycling some stuff so people can see what i've written in the past.
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09-14-05, 09:16 AM | #2 | ||||
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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props good imagery and the names were good way above my level lol
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09-14-05, 10:19 AM | #3 | ||||
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yeah mayne diz joint was nice ...alot of imagery, vocab was on point, wordplay was wut stood out tha most 2 me..meta's were good so much if i list dem all i could b here 4 dayz but yea keep writin cuz i c u got alot of potential fa sho ~1~LUV~1~THUG~
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