my verse(http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=209041)

this was nice but far fetch from the real truth Jesus ask god for a kingdom if you don't know none of god's blessings are free it was the price he had to pay to have his own kingdom, so look I'm not gonna ask god for a kingdome I may have to go through waht jesus did not me I'll chill on that bu tthe verse from the art for was very good you laid it dow i see no weaknesses maybe you can rhyme it a little bit more but you got your point across keep up the good work