dope drop by both, bone your verse was decent, i liked it tho,flow was god too.. i love your emotion, and how deep it was...

Spray paint your rhyming words are nice, good flow, verse was decent as well, but i still like it..

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Word..upping for some more feedback

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what you know about life you only know how to hate youfr soul isn't worth a one plug nickel you hell bound

^thank you for being banned

good bye.

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I'm sorry for the freepost but god damn, Shaft Get The Fuck Out Of The Forms Man, You Post The Most Stupid Shit.....If You keep comming atleast post something decent and quit fucking with bone collector, this shit just gets more annoying every day

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Bone
i think your really elevatin now, after readin this im gettin the feelin of a nice flow. you shorten your lines more so it flows now, you also have a good stucture. very good vocabulary and choices of words. you could up your creativty a little more give some eternal multiples to give it some depth. overall good

Spray
hmm you've done better before, your flow is weak and as is stucture. your vocabulary was insanly good, but some how made ya shit seemed forced, overall nice image to ya shit but i'd expect somin better from you next time.

overall good collab

can yall rtf on anything in my sig or anything in the forum dont matter

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BC: It felt like your flow was a bit choppy in some parts, and that you forced some of the rhymes in places. Vocab wasnt over-done at all, in fact you coulda tossed more in to liven it up a little. The imagery was good, but your lackings brought it down a little. The best part about your piece would be the entire thing. It never got off-topic and the rhyme scheme was not too bad. Not going to mention structure b/c it doesnt really matter anyways.

SP: You had more consistant structure and flow, in my opinion, however towards the middle it felt like you were given up, then you rushed the ending. You had good vocab for the most part, all used in the right places and a few multies to liven it up a bit. Nice job bro.

Overview: Nice drop BC/SP as always theres room for elevation, but you guys threw down quite well this time, keep it up!

RTF

-Metnalz

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^thankz for the feedback upping for some more

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Look on the bright side BC. Atleast you get free thread uppin' from Shaft's bitching.

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^lol word..but shaft's about to be banned so its all going to end soon

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OLE BOY RIGH THERE HEADED TO HELL BIG TIME

BONECOLLECTER bitch even as the prince of whales still be dense and prevail uncrowned you're fun clown so put your gun down mess around and shoot your toe you just a prostitute and hoe I dispute your flow your reputation is crap an infected but separation from rap will correct it. your brain is a funnel so drain that tunnel
Of whachness you write a bundle of fact less lyrical material you not elevating
You come with slop hating so why you get props for sedating real rapper bitch
Your chapters itch for flavor and homey there ain’t none

Can you make fun of all my threads please shaft, before you get banned. They need ups again.

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Tell Strobe To Retire Bonecollecter I Will Bitch Wiill Ban Me

Your bitching doesnt annoy me in the slightest. It shows activity in the forums AND I find your posts quite ammusing... Not to mention your tenacity and perserverance of your quest to shut down an internet website, or whatever the fuck you're attemtping to do.

All in all, after a deeper view into this observation, I find your pressance oddly comforting. I now have full confedence in BC's decisions as a Mod if he is able to piss somebody off so much that they troll religiously on an internet rap site.

Thanks for the amussment, keep it up.

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