I can hear the blatant and off-beat loop and cut points in the intro.

The beat's cool, but off-beat to it self. The sample is off beat from the bass and snare which destroyed the synchrnozitaion of the entire track and the loop point is about a second to a second and a half too soon, so it just sounds liek a skiping record, rather than a repeated melody. The quality on the track was 'mild' and its' the mic it self. The effects on the vocals were distracting and also made em sound kinda washed out, sorta liek a stretched casette or Video Tape would sound after some serious miles. The flow on it was jerky - sounds liek it was a poem that was put to a beat and the emotion in the delivery was flat, especially compared to the emotion in the lyrics. The fact that it was short and ended abruptly pretty much put the nail in the coffin for this track for me. As a track, it's bad from the beat to the delivery, althoguh the message is strong which is a shame.

- Apexx

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I have a feeling you did not listen to the track.......hmmm because you mention a sample, aint no sample in the track and there is no message in the track it is what happend to my aunty

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^ why u always ducking me on aim nigga?

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yo this was really touching making me feel like making one about my GRANDMOM because she passed away i was actually feelin this!the lyriks were the strongest part but also the beat and the emotion!this is a hot track!keep it up homie and soon or later u gon be one of the noticed!and yo wanna collab<>?

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You're a fuckin idiot. What you told us in your horrible song about your "aunty" was a message. How do you communicate to dumb motherfuckers like yourself. With a message. Look how specific that is. Na, I ain't even gonna argue with you because you know its' the truth, you just don't want to admit it publically.

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Look "bruh" dont act like youre some hard ass veteran because you can write shit intellectual and all that and get all worked up on a opinion. I thought you were the 25 year old here....you should be an adult by now. And dont take out on me youre frustrations, because whenever it seems I make any sort of comment to you or about you, youre on the defensive, lighten up "dawg", aint you the one closest to the industry however youre on 24/7 beefing with kids, nah man I actually think you some mark ass fake...and I was stating my opinion...and also "sir" kindly check yo self.....

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shit thats dope...could be longer.....
but quality is nice........just keep it up mayne

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