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| ThA NoToRiOuS D |
  
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5 | 83.33% |
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10-08-05, 05:09 PM
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Voted For: flow verse
punches:flow wordplay:flow structure: notorious personals: niether winner:flow explination: ok to really breakdown the above reasons, this is how i saw it. flow was on point against D with the punches and wordplay, i feel the phd line was a valuble line to his win, the roof line was ok but not to special, a little played too but it had what needed to winn in this battle, the flow was good but choppy in spots as for notorious he had his bars structured right but failed to come strong with wordplay and punches and it takes those to winn a battle, structure alone cant do it so in my result i go with flow verse as the winner of this battle do to better word play and punches, thats my vote 1 |
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10-09-05, 12:23 PM
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IP: B88F 0CC8
uppin 4 dis bych..........uppin uppin uppin uppin...
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ThA noToRiOuS d..   Deviously Devine DesignsBest Thing Since Sliced Bread (2)Me vs. wyteknyte(2) (1)Me vs. Flow Verse(1) |
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10-10-05, 12:01 AM
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IP: A23B D5BB
uppping i thought 3-0 ment k.o but for sme reason i still need votes
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 just like the smilie says . . . can u spit . . .  or u just gonna make me laff
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10-10-05, 09:17 AM
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IP: A23B D5BB
still upping even though i already won....someone vote
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just like the smilie says . . . can u spit . . . or u just gonna make me laff
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10-13-05, 05:53 PM
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IP: 6F6F 02B6
isn't 3-0 knockout then why is this battle still up?
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just like the smilie says . . . can u spit . . . or u just gonna make me laff
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10-14-05, 11:13 PM
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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Voted For: flow verse
notorius no personals put all of ur liknes together you need to work on the coabs in ur rhyme scheme didnt really feel any of ur lines to be honest elevate better vocab and wordplay you didnt have any personals either so meh however i was felling ur fucking on the roof line and thats about it work on personals not a bad battle rtf explained honest votes on these battles or i will dq my vote http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=210496 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=211555 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=210494
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10-16-05, 02:09 PM
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upping cause i still need one more vote
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just like the smilie says . . . can u spit . . . or u just gonna make me laff
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10-16-05, 04:15 PM
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Voted For: ThA NoToRiOuS D
Vocab- Notorious Flow- Notorious Structure- Notorious Aiight, here my explenations. "I clock and cuff your ass like a cop enforcing curfew I'm sticking pins in your head and I don't know voodoo" Vs. "Honestly the way I abuse you bitch you should call me pimp. You slut This battle is over so bitch Grab a coke and a smile and shut the fuck up" Honestly, Notorious had better vocab that made it sick. I didnt really notice anything that stuck out in Flow. Other than tha line i posted up. Notorious's shit stuck out like "whoa" Good battle 2 each. Notorious has my vote.
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10-19-05, 09:13 PM
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IP: 6EB9 28C9
Voted For: flow verse
Flow verse Fools keep stating their “big” but please do tell Y it only took “4 bars” to put this fuck in a “cell” Concept had potential.. worded wrong.. Kid thinks he’s the sickest rapper better than me? Na here’s the truth By accepting this battle you got screwed over. Like fucking on a roof Decent.. He thinks his lines are “funny” but here’s the fact If “ass” got a “PhD” he still wouldn’t be a “wise-crack” Nah.. Honestly the way I abuse you bitch you should call me pimp. You slut This battle is over so bitch Grab a coke and a smile and shut the fuck up Not a punch.. ThA NoToRiOuS D My lyrics sour to your ears like a lime Masta Killah rapping don't even need to rhyme Nah.. I clock and cuff your ass like a cop enforcing curfew I'm sticking pins in your head and I don't know voodoo Decent.. My punchlines type hard like throwing a horseshoe My shit unrehearsed so you could call it impromptu Not a punch.. I bet..i'll make this guy 4-9 in just 1 hush Hitting you and your town like a bum rush Nah.. And flow verse whats going on through your mind? Too late, you're falling too far behind Not a punch.. Overall, Flow verse came with one decent line.. one concept that had potential, and two lines that weren't that good. Tha Notorious D had one decent line and the rest weren't that good. Flow verse just had the better overall verse. He had better concepts, attempted more wordplay (he also had better wordplay) and more connecting punches. So, in conclusion, Flow verse gets my vote for the better overall verse. Vote - flow verse Both of you should join the Punchline League. |
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