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10-17-05, 08:31 AM
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Within Eternity's Wither
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This piece was iight.........you were too basic on the vocab and the flow was
like i was reading but the imagry and some emotion stood out in a few areas the structure of this piece was decent i like it overall just the flow and the vocab that could've really be betta ya kno
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