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10-17-05, 02:24 AM | #1 | ||||
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Apotropaic (3-0) vs. The Revelation (3-0)
IP: 6EB9 28C9
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10-19-05, 03:57 PM | #2 | ||||
GG Haterz
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IP: 71E7 6664
Ooooh at the new graphic.
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10-19-05, 11:25 PM | #3 | |||
New to RV
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IP: 6EB9 28C9
checking in this
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10-21-05, 04:49 PM | #4 | ||||
GG Haterz
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IP: 71E7 6664
"A pot" of gold for this leprecaun, small wins with simple words,
But his luck has ran out, and crashed faster then a tire off the curb. ------------------------------------------------------------------ Wordplay, name is green (leprecaun), leprecauns = lucky, tires crash down after hitting a curb. His luck ran out. Is it that hard?
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For Anyone Who Wants to Talk to Me ^^I think this explains my view on gangster rap perfectly. |
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10-21-05, 09:46 PM | #5 | |||
New to RV
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IP: 6EB9 28C9
you fell off, its easy to see that im ownin ya, dog see
when this rev drops, ill just push my car over his body |
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10-21-05, 09:58 PM | #6 | |||
(TeamOne)
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IP: 6F79 1B5B
apots was actually decent... when u re-read it, it makes sense... this one was hard for me... first i thought rev's was good but the ending about a tire was kinda odd to me... i think apot edged this one out
V/ Apotropaic |
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10-21-05, 10:04 PM | #7 | ||||||
Coming to Kill you All
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IP: 564A A007
Rev was too technical,in my opinion.
And I don't like it when people have to explain shit in order for the other person toget it anymore... v/Apotropiac.. |
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10-21-05, 10:10 PM | #8 | |||
I Hurt.
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IP: 49B0 4F0B
I hate to give this to Apot cuz Car/Rev nameplays are sooo played. However, Rev's was just so forced and explained that it wasn't good at all.
Vote - Apotropaic |
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10-21-05, 11:20 PM | #9 | ||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: 15E4 7241
vote Apotropaic better punch
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10-22-05, 01:38 AM | #10 | ||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 591C A203
v/apple, I mean apo
OH SHIT Im gonna whore you with that concept if we ever get matched up. |
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10-22-05, 09:26 AM | #11 | |||
Skadoosh!
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IP: 9DB1 64D6
Voted for Apotropaic
The Rev, I didn't really like the whole leprechaun play on his name because it is green, that's like saying its cool to come in and use a sunlight play on your name because it is yellow. And then taking it to a car tire off the curb/ crashing concept just seemed like you were heading in a different direction and that part to the second line didn't really work with the leprechaun concept. Apo, your punch was kinda basic, and you had a real played nameplay on The Rev...but your's was actually an easily identifiable nameplay, and it had a mild bit of humour. Also the fact that it was not necessary for you to explain your punch made it better. V/ - Apotropaic |
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10-22-05, 11:51 AM | #12 | ||||||
Insane in the textbrain
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IP: CF51 8482
"A pot" of gold for this leprecaun, small wins with simple words,
But his luck has ran out, and crashed faster then a tire off the curb. ------------------------------------------------------------------ Wordplay, name is green (leprecaun), leprecauns = lucky, tires crash down after hitting a curb. His luck ran out. Is it that hard? ^^why explain it then? But nah, this is way too forced, and not really harsh at all anyway you fell off, its easy to see that im ownin ya, dog see when this rev drops, ill just push my car over his body ^^not really effective logical connection between revs and car but this is more direct than your opponent's v/Apo
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10-22-05, 02:59 PM | #13 | |||||||
the medicine man
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IP: 888C 2BD4
v/ apo
better punch |
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10-22-05, 03:38 PM | #14 | |||
Banned: Biting
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IP: 21D9 C3FE
Wordplay, name is green (leprecaun), leprecauns = lucky, tires crash
down after hitting a curb. His luck ran out. Is it that hard? ^^ must be if you have to explain it that much and then ask that question lol... you fell off, its easy to see that im ownin ya, dog see when this rev drops, ill just push my car over his body wasnt that good but good enough for the win |
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10-23-05, 07:59 AM | #15 | |||||||
Evolution
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IP: 0DD2 7DAA
v/ Apotropaic
nice punch imo... took me a minute to get revs punch |
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