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Old 10-22-05, 11:51 AM   #12
Vaskez
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"A pot" of gold for this leprecaun, small wins with simple words,
But his luck has ran out, and crashed faster then a tire off the curb.
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Wordplay, name is green (leprecaun), leprecauns = lucky, tires crash
down after hitting a curb. His luck ran out. Is it that hard?
^^why explain it then? But nah, this is way too forced, and not really harsh at all anyway


you fell off, its easy to see that im ownin ya, dog see
when this rev drops, ill just push my car over his body
^^not really effective logical connection between revs and car but this is more direct than your opponent's

v/Apo
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