http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=214319

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2541133

I posted this piece on another site and I didn't get much love so I'ma post it on this site to see what I getz..
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[intro-hook]
I bring the fire to the wood, do you see it?
Or will you react like "them" and just leave it?
Most of these kats don't have action plans.
With that, noone in this world really stands a chance.

[Verse One]
I'm tired of seein' the government try'na abolish me.
With 'me', I mean niggas who breathe in stale equality.
To 'them', seein' niggas fall is the purest quanity.
We work hard everyday, and 'they' want an apology?
The govenor sits on his ass "retarded" from labotomy.
Tryn'a learn some everyday math, they want my velocity.
means they want my sum of change, basically robbin' me.
They cant stand the 'game of life' so they play monopoly.
Niggas continue to multiply, 'they' think it kills economy.
Continue to dance around our funds like expensive choreography.
The government tries to erase me? Thats probably..
Keepin' they heads in our space like studying astronamy.
Trying to break us appart with our own biology.
Then relocate New Orleans peoples wit' bad geography.
They wanna 'wrap' the story up living Islamically.
So where is the government without its policies?

[hook 2x]

[Verse Two]
The game doesn't wanna be bothered accept to father-thee.
Its just like the officials, no need of sucessful technology.
Hip Hop police watchin' tracks, I keepz joggin' B.
Because my hunger isn't poor, my flow isn't poverty.
Continue to act like nerds, they HAVE TO bother me.
The system will get beat out, I'am stronger iLL-logically.
Government must like hell, the keep burnin' colleges.
They want to educate us, but the need knowledges.
They kick the black man, It never really astonishes.
Cause they wanna fuck us over, govern. dont like promises.
Negative images set youth appart, it all abolishes.
They wanna see us wash~dishes instead of the positives.
The fakeness-stay-around with the, purest fiction.
No greatness change around, we face jurest'diction.
We cannot say a word 'til the white jury further-decisons.
Bottom line is the government doesnt save, they murder~victims.
HoLLa...

[hook 2x]

wow, kill piece. i mean the message is clear.
the structure was top. this hook flowed well.
verse one was fire, had a few large words,
but thats yo style, and thats wat made the
work yours. it was real key. verse two was
hot as well. good read, mos def. keep it comin'...

if you ever want a collab. holla

-Prin