sup bro, i like you and i think you got talent but in some ways this is great in others its not.

Your vocab and rhyming was good, the multies were good and the structure was easy to the eye. It was a nice peice but im yet to see wat the topic was.

There wasnt much consistency to the peice, altho it was good i couldnt follow it well.

In that way this was your worst peice as the others followed better. Ignore haters cos they cant offer constructive criticism only bullshit hating.

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