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12-06-05, 12:25 PM | #1 | ||||||
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{{this Is Life}} Pouring Out My Heart Ya'll.~~
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Wassup ya'll...
i'm new too this recording thing...been flowing for about 2-3months now but been writing for a little longer just finished a track..called 'This is life'...i'm just flowing to Beanie siegals 'cant go on this way'.... listen to it and give some feedback....much appriciated~~~ http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=425723 This Is Life word life, i've seen better days been hustlin' for better ways cream and this paper chase 21 years gone right thru' me still lost caught in this maze still negative thoughts to call it a day but still, pray to stay afloat but still fall weaker never stand tall, never speak up its looking bleak cuzz cuzz cuzz~~~~~jeea Early visions of my life motion clips cut like incision blurry picture, somethings missing listen, picture life with no stress, no drama scripts that arent written, sittin spittin all day, getting all grey betting my life on it whatever the price even Christ on it, throw dice gamble with my life cuz this aint paradise to me jeea.... Searching thru' the life purpose the light shine bright on a wet surface i might notice, a reflection of myself invection at itself stressing as the Henny sets in minds comtemplatin' anguish times, raps hesitatin' feeling like my soul levitating out of control, swerving drunk thoughts got me cursing a mind of a hustler, puttin work in puttin words together its now or never chasing for that green paper supreme cream, time to get that cake up fake love, fake wassups wanna luck up and shine like Jacob i got boys tokin haze 24/7 blaze heavy gettin high like the heavens getting by with no thoughts, no remorse of course ya'll my mans from the heart but some shit i just dont endorse i dwell in it life's a trap that i fell in it trynna excel but just hell wit' it cradle to the grave wit' it braveheart till i'm rest in peace wit' it i'mma beast wit' it i've seen the light the cream the life, seems so nice been thru' strife prevail whatever the price no dice games on blocks no glocks, strains or cops i'm hot, reign on top sustain LO dont stop.... Last edited by LivestOne : 12-08-05 at 05:15 PM. Reason: wrong txt |
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12-06-05, 05:01 PM | #2 | ||||||
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uppin;;;;;;;;;;
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12-06-05, 05:05 PM | #3 | ||||||
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whats the point of postin "audio" in the thread title when you posted this in the songs forum?
lmao
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12-06-05, 05:23 PM | #4 | ||||||
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why...u mad? lol smh...
feedback please ya'll;;; 1
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12-06-05, 05:23 PM | #5 | ||||||
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if I was mad, I wouldn't have put "lmao", genius
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12-06-05, 05:28 PM | #6 | ||||||
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lol..come on man..this shit is childs play b..i aint trynna argue like that thru' the net..
i wont put 'audio' on here again....cool? lol 1 |
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12-08-05, 05:17 PM | #7 | ||||||
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Come On!!!!! Lol
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