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09-14-05, 06:29 AM | #1 | |||||
The Topical Juggernaut
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Hateful Lover (Drop)
IP: D35B 3F85
..Hateful Lover.. I awake each morning... sweating, swearing and scorning As I look toward the bedpost, and just sit there mourning Daily, like its groundhog, I repeat this same lame routine And for some insane twist of thought I hope it's a dream So slowly I rise... and to my demise, I cry... it's real... I succumb to the pain that I feel as my lungs break seal Pissed at myself for allowing this type of suicidal situation Pissed at probation for throwin' stress at me non-stop- This is my life.. a horrible nightmare of scare for most But for me it's a reality and that fantasy world is long off So I sit and I stare, dully-aware everyday, of my bedpost.. ..2 months later.. Lately things have changed and aren’t the same as before... It's harder to breath with these machines.. my lungs are sore I can barely sit up.. without pain, and if I do.. I spit up- Blood, like a fountain of rain.. it's a shame I can't rewind Cos’ if I could? knowing how fast it got me entwined... I’d change my mind, give it up, and thank myself in time But instead I lie as breathless as the restless in waiting Contemplating, as my sad lone existence is fastly fading.. Suddenly like showering sparks a stark part of me dies.. In the next moment my eyes swell up with tears as I cry This is the end, where death begins.. I lived my life as a lie. And as the respirators pause and the alarms take charge The doctors rush in and slowly fold up his withered arms Unplug the breath machine & X-rays of lungs is not hard No time to waste for another juvenile is incoming soon Gotta' clean up this room and make it anew for another That tried to be cool & inhaled the cancer dear as his lover.
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09-14-05, 09:13 AM | #2 | ||||
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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good emotion your very creative and your flow wow you should be an audio head vocab nice but not overdone props
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12-15-05, 01:38 PM | #3 | |||||
The Topical Juggernaut
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IP: D35B 3F85
Uppin to liven up the forum.
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12-15-05, 05:50 PM | #4 | |||||
Banned: Cheating
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I've Only Read The First Verse Cause I Gotta Go To Work Soon, But It's Real Nice With Deatiled Emotion. Like The Way Your Lines Are Structured......Keep It Up And Good Job On Tryin To Liven This Forum
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