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Topic: Space as we Know it

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-25-06 at 12:42 AM

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H.D. has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-22-06 12:42 AM.

In space light is insignificant even though it's limitless
Take for instantance the fact the stars in pockets of gas
Vast cast brilliant reflective waves shimmering across gallaxies
The fact that light exist is sort of a fallacy, seeing is believing
Those decieving see space is an empty void, dark and desalinate
Barren yet filled with chucks of planetery pieces pulled through it murk
A chaos set astray when GOD forgot the forces he put at work
Results beserk, creative and destructive forces aligned
Space is good and evil in and outside the mind
Space itself is dark but many suns provide the light
Gravitational pulls make dust collide, and in that bring life
However meteors and astroriods turn rocks to ash and viods
All that is created and deployed in done in space
Matter isn't created or destroyed just changes shapes
Space is every entity's boundry and there's no escape

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I Am Unreal. has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-24-06 10:28 PM.

Space As I Know It

They say aspiring astronauts are admiral souls
Advocating life’s questions by amending a role
They’re consoled by a zephyr’s breeze… eased
By a better tether chaining Earth to human beings
Space is perceived as
“The infinite extension of the three-
Dimensional region… in which all matter exists”
But to me it seems to be an end to a means
Where bliss escapes me and explores my needs
I employ these themes, different as contrasted, but
Sometimes I wonder…
“Does space go on forever?
Or do we just make it such?”
I had a hunch, go in search, find truth and live life
But as infinite was defined by…
“Unlimited in spatial extent”
…………………………………My insight died…
I knew I’d never know the answers until life passed
Or else I’d be chasing something that didn’t exist.
Have you ever heard the tale of a child so weary?
To ask out a girl that he loved so dearly?
He’d write “sincerely, anonymous” to sign his post
It was monotonous; clearly a girl can’t see a ghost
So she stopped looking, and they boy lost all hope
And the story goes; it’s the same for every timid boy
But how is timid defined?
If you say “Lacking self-confidence”
You’re out of your mind.
See, being timid is simply being shy,
Some would say that clouds sometimes hide the sky…
So we see eye to eye.
Because there are stars out there just as shy as our great sun
And another life form is likely taking to every one…
So one day when I become my own shooting star
I’ll talk to a wise and aged poet…
I know it’s not fact. It’s just space as I know it.

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Space As I Know It

They say aspiring astronauts are admiral souls
Advocating life’s questions by amending a role
They’re consoled by a zephyr’s breeze… eased
By a better tether chaining Earth to human beings
Space is perceived as
“The infinite extension of the three-
Dimensional region… in which all matter exists”
But to me it seems to be an end to a means
Where bliss escapes me and explores my needs
I employ these themes, different as contrasted, but
Sometimes I wonder…
“Does space go on forever?
Or do we just make it such?”
I had a hunch, go in search, find truth and live life
But as infinite was defined by…
“Unlimited in spatial extent”
…………………………………My insight died…
I knew I’d never know the answers until life passed
Or else I’d be chasing something that didn’t exist.
Have you ever heard the tale of a child so weary?
To ask out a girl that he loved so dearly?
He’d write “sincerely, anonymous” to sign his post
It was monotonous; clearly a girl can’t see a ghost
So she stopped looking, and they boy lost all hope
And the story goes; it’s the same for every timid boy
But how is timid defined?
If you say “Lacking self-confidence”
You’re out of your mind.
See, being timid is simply being shy,
Some would say that clouds sometimes hide the sky…
So we see eye to eye.
Because there are stars out there just as shy as our great sun
And another life form is likely taking to every one…
So one day when I become my own shooting star
I’ll talk to a wise and aged poet…
I know it’s not fact. It’s just space as I know it.


-Sorry bout that, had it posted in the wrong place...

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up for a vote or two..................................

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Was he robbed of the ashphalt that cushioned his face?

mm vote please.

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Voted For: I Am Unreal.

Dam nice battle by both, both dropped some nice
barz but I am takes this battle.

HD u come nice, had very nice vocab, flow was
nice but was lacking complexity and imaginary..
you verse was written well strong on the basics
but was lacking meaning ? u decided to stay on
subject but did didn't flip it.

I am your verse was very well written,.. flow was
nice lost it at a few points but that's cool,.. vocab
was nice but your complexity and imaginary was
on top. It was just a very well wrtten verse.

Vote I am stay up both

1~

thanks, up////////////////////////////////////////

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You guys don't have the same ip adress... douchebags.

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