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01-30-06, 10:57 PM
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"Fall Back"...UNF Feat. Limited Edition...
IP: 2EF1 1720
www.soundclick.com/limitededitioncan
Yeah, UNF wanted me on this so I freestyled a quick verse. YES it is 100% freestyled, I know it's dope haha.  1st Verse- UNF Hook- UNF 2nd Verse- Limited Edition Peep and we'll return the favor. Also this the first track I've posted with my dope new quality.  Word.http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220496 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220944 |
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01-31-06, 12:04 AM
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Peace, Love, Unity
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IP: AB23 98FF
Decent. The beat is very chill. UNF's verse is hard to hear but he has some decent lines. Only problem with the hook in my opinion is that uneccessary YOOO in it. L.E., great quality now man. Its easy to tell you freestyled that, lol. You said fuckin' alooooot. And you got some pauses in there. But its still catchy. Good shit, fellas.
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01-31-06, 11:37 AM
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Nt Your Average
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IP: A7B3 C9C1
Thanks.............Uppp
Leave Links!!!!!
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01-31-06, 12:41 PM
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Light Weight
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IP: 46D9 7869
UNF
flow: dope Delivery: decent delivery, maybe coulda been upped Lyrics: tight, good shit LIMITED Flow: nice flow Delivery: Nice, really feelin it Lyrics: decent....some played rhymes, but it happens
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01-31-06, 02:06 PM
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Nt Your Average
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IP: FA7F 298F
^^^^^^Thanks.......uppppp
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01-31-06, 02:55 PM
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L.E
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IP: 2EF1 1720
Thanks for the feed...uppin...
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01-31-06, 03:11 PM
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OYD
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IP: 64CA 6C26
UNF...I don't like how ur riding this beat...makes ur flow sound jerky
but ur flow is good vocal levels all sound appropriate hook sounds coo...needs to be ad libbed more though...sounds rather skimpy LE...ur voice comes through nicely with ur new mic...sounds more natural flow is good like the way u chose to ride the beat = no bad ur flow/delivery would be better with more breath control...think BIGGIE SMALLS good drop 1 |
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01-31-06, 03:43 PM
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Nt Your Average
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IP: FA7F 298F
Thanks...........
Uppp!!!!
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01-31-06, 04:06 PM
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New to RV
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IP: 0A5E D29F
decent nice flow kid
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01-31-06, 04:59 PM
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Nt Your Average
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IP: FA7F 298F
^^Lol
Thanks Uppppppppppppppppppp! Im Listenin To That Crazy Ass Village Pimp Track Its Funny As Fuck
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02-04-06, 10:35 PM
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O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP: B383 052E
UNF.....when you came in, you were a little off beat, but then you picked it up. You seem to do well on these slow beats. It does well for your accent cause we can understand your words a little better. Hook is horribly in need of help. Your quality definitely needs to be raised like ten notches. Go read my tutorial man.....I really think it can help you out....
Limited.....you came in pretty nice. Your quality is pretty good on this track. I liked the "they better fuckin prove it" line. You stayed on beat pretty well too. Good track overall though.....just up the quality UNF  ™RTF http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221281
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