this is anuther collab....

...this is my personal favorite now, lol, even tho it changes all teh time...this is also my first time recordin wit cool edit so is this quality better or worse than my other trakks...check it uot, vote hot and leave feed...

lunie 360 on first verse and hook/ me on second and third verse

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Hook's not bad. Maybe a couple add libs in the background or something might spice it up a little. First verse not bad. Dude had some pretty good flow. Content wasn't bad either. Eastcoast comes in a little low, but the flow is nice. Slips up a little, but pretty good overall. You need to speak up a little too. I can tell that you might not be used to spitting this fast or something cause you sound uncomfortable. Third verse I wasn't feeling that much. Flow was kinda.......meh. You definitely could have taken your time on this verse. You got some pretty good potential, but you need to work on your presence a little. Spit into the mic like you own the shit. What I do is I tend to get mad at the mic and even have, like, an angry face when I spit.....it helps me get into the right delivery. You should have been coming in more hype and you sounded monotone. You also need to work on your syllable count a little. I don't actually count them, but I like saying the lines over and over again and seeing what I need to fix. Sometimes you can just change a word or two......

Hope this helps ™

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Ayo. EastCoast ya shit is very dope for a young gun. i like da chorus pretty ill. i actually have both Cubase SX3 and Cool Edit 2.0 i preferr cool edit because it's easier... but dope track i got more free beats if you want at www.verbalvendetta.com

My hot track is located at www.verbalvendetta.com in the songs section... it is called Doubt Me

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decent beat....... good hook...... i usually take out the ansane..... whos the first guy???? hes got some good hook ability, but his lyrics aint that good, real real real commercial, hes real good at it, like his shit could be on the radio easily

nice switch up with u to go alil faster, its alil harder to understand wat ur doin, up ur delivery alil bit, u dont sound like u mean wat u sayin until like halfway in it....... it seems like it takes u alil while to get into spittin ur verse

this track was decent overall, nuthin to complain about a sorta club track with a good hook and beat...... keep it up

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hook is tight shit man....u DEFF got a voice for this man....catchy shit.....i cant complain bout none of it...well...u jus said ant you so...leme get to you lol

voice is nice man..flow is a bit rushed...like off beat a bit...write to the track a bit more...then take a lil time w it..u rap like ur running outa time on ur 1st verse..i usta do the same thing...


3rd verse seems like ur more comfortable LOL @ elavating on the same song...u did well in verse 3 sept like the last 3 bars u rushed again...ur delevery is nice and emotion is their..lyrics kinda simple but this is a club track so thats iight n shit...idk what else to say,this is a nice piece man

stay up

1nE

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HELLLZ YEEAHH !!!!

iite iite..

1. thanx alot enygma ill keep it in mind
2. ill def, check you out vendetta
3. team one, i kept the insane cuz it sounded pretty good wit this beat i thought
4. thanx alot fo rthe feed cho, ill keep it in mind

uppin

I like the ansane beat. The chorus is catchy, I was feeling it. The verse is hot as well, it has some fine lines. The 2nd guy is hard 2 understand in parts cause he kinda mumbles. 3rd cat sounds fine, not as good as the 1st one but with a decent flow. he needs some kind of more confidence on the mic.

Keep em coming!

pz!
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more ansane beats...haa...that was sooo LAST week


lol


quality seems good

I like the hook...not bad there

1st cat...flow is good and delivery matches the tone of the beat = good

lyrics are rather common though

2nd cat...too much (H) on your vocals...maybe use a de-esser...If I was listenin to this through Windows Media instead of Soundclick, it'd bust my speakers


I like the sound of the track fellas


not bad


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yea soon as i did this trakk, i started seeing people usin ansane beats like crazy, i didnt pick it tho lol...but q, youll ahve to fill me in on wut you mean about (h) and a de-esser cuz to be honest i dont know that much bout all the technical stuff, i jsut read tutorials, take advice, and learn fom others ....werd...so hit me up witta pm or sumthin mayne...but yea thanx for the feed and zero, ill hit up that link