The weight of a woman lands
on a blank face of woven slate,
as, creating glance is taking to be
not the easiest of beauty's tasks.
I hold a thin brush under grips
of cold finger tips, choking up,
hold alittle higher; stoke the
brittle strings of paper fiber
with a dripping bow soaked in mental
growth formulating paint strokes
while I orchestrate this instrumental.

Look forward into her porcelain
skin before I blink, shook my
sore head as swelling eyes widen
and her sight melts a mans mind
while staring into two pastel eyes.
With every past splash of green
I press to the head of this masterpiece
we grasp another golden moment
together in an ever lasting notion.

The lush greens always craved
the ready touch of a heavy brush
stroke, and although the choking
of swallows along a lungless throat
haunted the dawn of every hollow
ending to the beauty of a rising note;
She couldn't help but to follow me,
her eyes had died......................
It was I who decided to dye them envy.

The heart broken brush cried
a scared spectrum's dyeing shards
of love as I wiped his marred eyes
against a stretch of page to create fine art.
Her open portrait basked in the last
intuition of a past moments unfortunate
collapse as the final draft of confliction
styled her beautiful smile in disposition.

The doors part, she's on display,
Leonardo's love holds a piece of
his soul, and you can see Mona Lisa's
every reflecting emotion attending
.......... Depending on your day.


http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=222834
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=191769

Look forward into her porcelain
skin before I blink, shook my
sore head as swelling eyes widen
and her sight melts a mans mind
while staring into two pastel eyes.
With every past splash of green
I press to the head of this masterpiece
we grasp another golden moment
together in an ever lasting notion.


*deaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad*

We have to collab again. You be illin atty.

^Damn i was really feeling that..you had lovely emotions and very good feeling in your drop like you always do love your short but sweet lines..really gets your point across to the reader..Overall nice job...and keep it up.

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Thanks for the love you guys... And Ghost, what's your alias? (BoneCollector?)

^yea thats me...

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Oh alright, it's been awhile man... Good to see you again

that was a pretty good verse i liked it ................

real nice drop atti, good structure. always enjoy reading your material.....the flow was real good and it had me hooked from the beginning

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Thanks alot you two

this was dope..to be completely honest....before....(i havn't read your shit since we were beefin about CS) your shit was cool, but a lot of it was just big words that made sense, but they wern't the most relevant...or best words to fit, or describe the emotion you were trying to convey...it was better than a lot of the shit on here...but i just couldn't ever feel drawn in, because the forced vocab took away from what you were really trying to say.................Now, it's completely different, the words fit perfectly, and they are extremely relevant....this piece is genius right here for a few reasons....1...the imagery is amazing...thats all i can really say about that....2....at first it seems more poetic...which it sort of is..but a rhyme scheme does come out, and it's interesting to see that, i don't know if that was accident or not...but it worked....3....it has a great twist, and ties in with the imagery...you almost say..."how did i not know" the end makes the imagery 10 times brighter.......besides my own..(not gonna say who's i like more) this is probably the best piece i've ever read on rapverse....and if theres something i'm forgetting, it's def the piece i've read in a long ti,e....very well done

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Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate.

"watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox

The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew

Werd famo its good to be bacc.. and good to have you bacc posting again.

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Lol ya man, my shit before I left for Rb was unhoned and amatuerish. It really helped when I started writing more and more poetry and writing with all the guys from Po' non stop. And ya, the rhyme scheme is meant to switch up and twist all over the place throughout, that's part of the style I've been using for the past 2 or 3 pieces I've done... It's meant to flow no matter what word lands on the beat, and the use of punctuation rather than making the ending of a line the most important alows the content to flow better and really engage the reader rather than a stop and go type piece. Thanks alot for the love man.

Look forward into her porcelain
skin before I blink, shook my
sore head as swelling eyes widen
and her sight melts a mans mind
while staring into two pastel eyes.
With every past splash of green
I press to the head of this masterpiece
we grasp another golden moment
together in an ever lasting notion.
damn, loved every little bit of this

The heart broken brush cried
a scared spectrum's dyeing shards
of love as I wiped his marred eyes
against a stretch of page to create fine art.
dope

The doors part, she's on display,
Leonardo's love holds a piece of
his soul, and you can see Mona Lisa's
every reflecting emotion attending
.......... Depending on your day.
loving the ending

Dope piece man, it was a damn good read.

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i'm bored.

Thanks alot for the love fam.