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04-30-06, 01:56 AM | #1 | ||||
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The Truth And Nothing But - Drop Links - tryna to shed my newbie skin
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This is my first serious attempt at an audio, i read the tutorials around here, and tried to apply it to my tracks.
My mic only cost 10 dollars, so i put alot of work into making the vocals sound nice . Anyways, be harsh, tell me what i can work on so i can elevate Halfway the thru the 2nd verse i just decided to freestyle, so if theres any freestyle heads around here and wanna get down some time, let me know, i can freestyle all day.tryna to elvate in that department too Be Honest is all i want, just dont tell me to quit or some shit cuz im seriously tryna to elevate "This is my showcase" http://www.soundclick.com/catastrophy http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=2731829 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=227327
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04-30-06, 08:21 PM | #2 | |||||||
New to RV
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flow:um...7...not feelin it.. needs more work
lyrics: didnt get it either.. were u tryna tell a story or sumthin?? beat:10......producer is mad crazzy for dis 1 wasnt feelin da intro either man sorry..6 overall.....but for ya first trakk ..it was coo |
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05-06-06, 11:26 AM | #3 | |||||||
El Padrino
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aight.... I LOVE THIS BEAT.....
lol... you followed Waynes flow on this.... sound like Jeezy some spots.... you cant really hear everything you sayin.... you gotta uppp your vocals a bit... like 3.5.... actualy... upp it in the beginin... cuz the end it was fine... in the begining it was like you was whispering... so i couldnt hear your verse.... if this is a freestlye.... it was aight.... untill it got around 2mins and 30 seconds... it got pretty weak .... a lot damns.... a lot of geniric stuff to keep it going... like Ed Lover.... lol... from 105.1... that nigga be rhymin like you just did.... WOW... that cough at the end was a bit much.... things to work on: well.... next time you should prolly write a track... Freestyles are coo too... but .... this is Songs Forum... you know.... so.... write a track.... upp your vocals when you record.... and dont free style an outro to your track.... aight dogs.... keep dropin.... 5/10 RTF
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05-06-06, 01:02 PM | #4 | |||||||
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AYYY YO BOI...
u the designer right?... shii...i was in a crew wit u but i forgot what... anyways illl check out the shit later |
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