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05-26-06, 11:57 AM | #16 | |||||||||
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aight listening: Beat - not feeling it...
flows a lot more improved...articulation needs a bit more work as does delivery...lmao @ chip shop line...you've got better but i think you should work wit some better beats...actually holds ya verse back in a way...or at least search up better soundclick beats coz them beats sound like someone a raver would listen to lol... but keep droppin you'll be giving E.C a run for his money soon links in sig
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05-27-06, 12:18 PM | #17 | ||||
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sounds like a fruity beat, lmao yeah sounds dance hall lol, beat is not bad,pretty good,flow is mmm i dunno man, but nice track, youre getting better,who made this beat
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05-27-06, 03:29 PM | #18 | |||||||
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tha beat is drownin ur vocals..cudnt really get tha full effect on tha track since i cant really hear tha lyrics..try lowerin tha beat nd raising tha vol on ur lyrics..track is short too..flo is pretty much there..overall tha track is koo..keep doin u mayn
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05-29-06, 05:14 AM | #19 | |||||||
The Alien Toung
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eww @ beat @ 1st...eww @ real beat...you come in w a lil to much energy..work into it a bit...a few "uhh's and yeah's" maybe...your bars r to long, made ur flow off a lot..delevery is not here cuz ur rushing...emotion is good though...
keep workin @ it...
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05-29-06, 08:25 AM | #20 | ||||
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iite, cheers .
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05-29-06, 09:16 AM | #21 | |||||||
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I hate this beat lmao.
Your flows improvd madly compared to what i remember.... Deliverys nice,presence has upped seem confident now,you have the biggest UK accent i've heard in a long time. Lyrics are koo, lol @polo line.. Good Shit Overall:6/10 Keep dropping..... RTF On "The New Breed Ft Jae Stacks" when i drop it plz
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