ahh nice piece friend...
flow was pretty nice
lines were even length
structure was easy to understand
your emotion was pretty dam nice..
pleasant and kept my interest...

favorite part:
Upon there departure I see my dying grandfather abeyant in a chair
... Undoubtedly unaware of me gazing seemingly without care ...
I see it again, as I've seen before, that puzzle labeled on the table ...
... One look before I go out again to persue my nightly technique ...
^nice....feelin this...kinda clicked imo

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