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Old 06-14-06, 02:43 PM   #8
Ace Heratoga
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Better fit washin dishes, you’ll be the slave gettin whipped
CS is the ish, don't get ya hopes up
............i'm talkin bout Crhyme Sindicate

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Kid you can't talk about none of my old bitches and hoes
.................Specialy when your current one looks like Spul

Ok this was mad weak... you both had lines that worked AGAINST you.

Mak, the shotty/creativity line was garbage, period. If your gonna do a 'violent' punchline pleeeassee be a little more creative. Personally I think you do the 3 line steeze all wrong, but thats just me, keep doing your thing.

Chris... wtf @ the king arthur line, just, W T F?? How can you even think thats an acceptable line. The spul line was funny as shit, but I havn't been here that long so I dunno if its played or whatever.

The ONLY reason I'm voting for Mak is because there's no other choice lol. His was a bit more 'battle' oriented I guess you could say. You both need to step it up.

Vote - Mak
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