You beat real Talk, ok great… nah im sorry but that’s funny
Phryme nice, but the rest of your battles…u lost to NOBODIES
I got a lot to do this week kid… I kinda live a wild life
So thanks kemp…
for giving me the only kid to make J bee look nice
Ya shit’s played mang… punches… style all been weak
I keep it original…
you the first king to be beheaded since Louis the XVI (Sixteenth)
Don’t pre write? Or use somethin I been workin on for weeks?
how the fuck can I do that? I ain’t heard of you since before this week

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Nothing

Ace, cool verse, lots of personals considering you prolly didn't know much about him. Pretty consistent verse all around. Raw, just wasn't feelin' much from you, felt that all your punches were either played ideas, or if they weren't, just not worded well. Like the last and weak thing, it made no sense really without explainin' it. Work on bein' more direct.

Vote - Ace

thanks for the feed back man....

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last line does make sense becouse of wat he says on his sig...and if u bible knowing person the U may know that it states that this nigga adam was lonely and shit so god ripd the his rib out and created a eve...the chick....so by me saying I'll give god wat ever is left of the rib, it make a lot of good sense and isn't as bad of a closer....did u actually read my verse man? sereousely did u?

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raw king



and ur style is old as fuck, like my link to my battle with kings
u would quote my whole verse, Im so ill, it probably would actually help u win
cuz u unimportant to this site, like spinners on 12 inches
u could start ur own crew and ud probably still hesitate to put urself in it

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ace


Kid you a pussy… so you better grow some nuts dawg
My bars leave you incarcerated…
No protection? I garuntee You’ll be getting fucked Raw
If anyone got a taste for him I got Precise aim for these fiends
To kill competition I keep it like d-12… rely on m16’s

^^this was nice


Don’t pre write? Or use somethin I been workin on for weeks?
how the fuck can I do that? I ain’t heard of you since before this week


cool verse ace got this..raw king is getting better... just dont explain punches dont look good...and think outside the box ...ace got this tho

vote-ace

thanks for the feed back...

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yea uppinn.....

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"Only god can judge me, but I'm atheist so you do the math..."

Nothing

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Kid you a pussy… so you better grow some nuts dawg
My bars leave you incarcerated…
No protection? I garuntee You’ll be getting fucked Raw
If anyone got a taste for him I got Precise aim for these fiends
To kill competition I keep it like d-12… rely on m16’s
I got a lot to do this week kid… I kinda live a wild life
So thanks kemp…
for giving me the only kid to make J bee look nice
Don’t pre write? Or use somethin I been workin on for weeks?
how the fuck can I do that? I ain’t heard of you since before this week

Wow, this was one-sided as fuck....Raw King, you seem to have some potential but you need to change your style n wording

Vote - Ace Heratoga