imma flawless you..

check...


yea u believe that

10 line


http://community.rapverse.com/showp...33&postcount=10
http://community.rapverse.com/showp...54&postcount=11
http://community.rapverse.com/showp...60&postcount=10
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..match...............

Let's talk computer's herb, u kno keeping it straight
cuz last time SE got noticed on a pc.. was windows 98
i'll cripple this bitch, crack a hip till he walks witta cane
n the best thing u'd do for me.. 's the last 3 letters of ya name
i see this dude's gangsta.. n i really bet that your fly dude
so 's kno doubt your a G ed.. ya kno since u dropped outta high school



ok so i don't care bout this leauge... couldn't no-show




6 bitch

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haha..

First off - ya lines are repitive and unoriginal..
Hell, i could mock ya whole damn style..
..But i ain't tryna send Butler a subliminal..
N i heard about ya girl - dat relationship's not doin good..
..But its' ironic how WE call her Lady Luck the way she knockin on wood..
Keep talkin as i get wild and clinch..
..N leave you pleased as punch - gun, and some other violent shit..

vote up...


*looks @ kempo ... u made me not care*

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wtf... vote u assholes

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Let's talk computer's herb, u kno keeping it straight
cuz last time SE got noticed on a pc.. was windows 98
i'll cripple this bitch, crack a hip till he walks witta cane
n the best thing u'd do for me.. 's the last 3 letters of ya name

vs

Nothing

Eddie i wastn really feeling any of your shit i've seen it all before and your wording wasnt good at all

v/Art

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dmn this shit slow

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lol @ a 6 line battle... its so short i'll do it bar by bar

Let's talk computer's herb, u kno keeping it straight
cuz last time SE got noticed on a pc.. was windows 98
seen some similar concepts, but its still personal so its okay
i'll cripple this bitch, crack a hip till he walks witta cane
n the best thing u'd do for me.. 's the last 3 letters of ya name
eh, seen a bunch of last letter type things.. kinda bland
i see this dude's gangsta.. n i really bet that your fly dude
so 's kno doubt your a G ed.. ya kno since u dropped outta high school
another decent nameplay

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First off - ya lines are repitive and unoriginal..
Hell, i could mock ya whole damn style..
..But i ain't tryna send Butler a subliminal..
wording seemed to be a bit indirect on this
N i heard about ya girl - dat relationship's not doin good..
..But its' ironic how WE call her Lady Luck the way she knockin on wood..
seems a bit played, but pretty cool
Keep talkin as i get wild and clinch..
..N leave you pleased as punch - gun, and some other violent shit..
I'm just not a fan of these "violent" type punches

I wish Artistik hadn't come with 3 nameplays, that kinda took away from his verse and if I had seen more nameplays on Eddie I'd prolly give him this, but i haven't so most of that was fresh. Eddie, I feel like you beat around the bush sometimes when you write. You got the idea, you just don't come as directly at him as you could.

Vote - Artistik

Let's talk computer's herb, u kno keeping it straight
cuz last time SE got noticed on a pc.. was windows 98
i'll cripple this bitch, crack a hip till he walks witta cane
n the best thing u'd do for me.. 's the last 3 letters of ya name
i see this dude's gangsta.. n i really bet that your fly dude
so 's kno doubt your a G ed.. ya kno since u dropped outta high school

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First off - ya lines are repitive and unoriginal..
Hell, i could mock ya whole damn style..
..But i ain't tryna send Butler a subliminal..

This was a decent battle, kinda hard to judge coz of its lack of lines but still decent drops on both sides.
Art came with some good Nameplays and punches in his verse. Eddie ..your stuff was good too but It lacked good wording, and good punches. the knock on wood line was ok but could have been better if worded more properly man.

V/ Artistik

RTF in my battle with Euthanize please...

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

3-0....



i think i'll stay in next week... see if i wanna give a effort

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Artistik -i'll cripple this bitch, crack a hip till he walks witta cane
n the best thing u'd do for me.. 's the last 3 letters of ya name
i see this dude's gangsta.. n i really bet that your fly dude
so 's kno doubt your a G ed.. ya kno since u dropped outta high school

Eddie-N i heard about ya girl - dat relationship's not doin good..
..But its' ironic how WE call her Lady Luck the way she knockin on wood..

Thiss battle was meeehhh Art got him wit the 3 last letters line
vote-Artistik