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I lead a life filled with crime
yeah, im stuck in the streets
Im steady losing peace of mind
Cause of cops on the beat
So where do I go to whom do I turn?
Im headed to eternal damnation, forever I'll burn
and never I'll learn.., Cause im still stuck in my ways
Im stuck in a daze
like a bat ive lost sight, yea im stuck in a cave
Im stuck in a maze
Im trapped and my mind is a haze
Things no longer makes since ive lost track of my days
So now i will blaze
Just to feel oh so glorious
Im ready to die, so now i feel oh so notorious
But still im on a quest and ive veered from my path
and knowledge is the water that i use for my bath



Uppin for feedback



http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204207
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235577

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The only thing to fear is fear itself and fear conquers all!!!!

u aint gon get no feedback till u get some links up in this muthafucka
are ya'll that stupid that u cant read the rules
havent u figured out why u aint gettin no feed when people dont follow the rules??

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we need a mod cause this is gay

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I've been giving feedback on others's shit since Ive been here. Just forgot to put up links.

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The only thing to fear is fear itself and fear conquers all!!!!

Uppin. Let me know what's hood

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The only thing to fear is fear itself and fear conquers all!!!!

then why dont u???...show proof that u left feed or no one gon think u did
just cuz the mods are gone dont mean u cant respect the rulez round here

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What the fuck you talking bout? I edited fresh links in already. They at the bottom of my verse.

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The only thing to fear is fear itself and fear conquers all!!!!

^^lmao just fuckin witcha

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still need thoughts

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The only thing to fear is fear itself and fear conquers all!!!!

im thinkin im hungry

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If you aint gonna give feedback on the piece then dont post in this thread. Still uppin for feedback.

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The only thing to fear is fear itself and fear conquers all!!!!

???????????? Damn, niggas cant give no feedback?

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The only thing to fear is fear itself and fear conquers all!!!!

still uppin. Where the fuck is niggas at?

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The only thing to fear is fear itself and fear conquers all!!!!

shawty this was actually decent, from the look of the verse itself i wasn't expectin it to be any good. but you got a pretty good flow, and some ight attempt at punches. So the only thing i would work on is ya punches or multies.....

holla at me on my shit..........links are in the sig

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