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11-12-06, 10:16 PM
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memory lane ft. mofo
IP: D165 C8D9
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4638439
i have the first verse and chorus. mofo is on the second verse. beat by da cypher. links: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3106197 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3106204 Last edited by djb : 11-12-06 at 10:25 PM. |
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11-12-06, 10:56 PM
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 6A24 77A2
4 people already killed this beat on here
 hook is awful its off beat the echo or whatever is over done you started on point then your flow got off a little bit lyrics were ok nothing special your emotion could be upped this guy sounds kinda like past tense  his verse was cool nothing really wowed me
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11-12-06, 10:58 PM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: 001C 5107
^^sounding like me? WTF are you crazy
his voice is way to high but anyways..you sound like cali...........and yeah...i'm not really feelin the flow.....lyrics are good you should try to take out some words and put in words with diff. syallables and it'll make it sound hot |
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11-12-06, 11:51 PM
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The Alien Toung
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IP: 6C9D D12E
yea, this beats ill
1st dude....quality is a bit iffy....writing good...kinda have the problem is have/had w pushing off flow for lyrics...gota get to a medium...left hook right thing, kinda played but used well....streem ocean line nice, i had one close to it...hooks not bad...2nd dudes nice..not as lyrical, but flows decent...went a totaly different direction then you..not a bad verse tho.....
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11-13-06, 06:04 PM
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IP: D165 C8D9
thanks for all the honesty guys. up
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