check. wanna go, 16?

Fuck it, 16 sounds good.

Alright, well the lines all together is 19, so match if ya want.

Listen..Ya trends out, like low rise jeans and leather..
and I ain't only talking about my verse when I say..
..I'ma Key...10x better..
I excrete fluids from bitches and your next to bleed..
I've gotta lock on pussy...and that locks been Keyed!!
Open and exposed...a hidden secret surpassed..
You couldn't produce creative shit..
With a constructive brain in your ass!!
I devour these fools, why you strive to cop a taste..
This dude can't be champ..
They don't make belts small enough to fit around his waist..
This fag loves rappin on computers..son he fears mics..
Dude raps in front of mirrors just so he can appear nice..
He can't spit, this dick's into lay-text(latex)..
Now look how I've stopped this pussies flow...
By inserting some play-text..
You're embarrasing, with those lines your forcing..
Man..This dude has been wacked since birth..
Just like his foreskin..

@Q

you're an idiot, and you think people like you? NOT
'n I don't have to sniff white out to make an IQ drop
but this kid beat me? pffft come on now, please
I mean EVERYONE knows Eye's cornea than me
hes no star, so what kind of idiot found dude?
he should for the hills,
but his fat ass will prolly end up rollin' down it too
where you reppin'? its all about where you begin from
so this kids from the Pitts? too bad he'll never be in one
hes probably a dropout, I'll knockout kid get smart
but I guess I'll be nice this time<--'cuz you NEVER are

wow @ you can't count. thats 14. and this is 10.

Open and exposed...a hidden secret surpassed..
You couldn't produce creative shit..
With a constructive brain in your ass!!
nice
This fag loves rappin on computers..son he fears mics..
Dude raps in front of mirrors just so he can appear nice..
decent

vs...

you're an idiot, and you think people like you? NOT
'n I don't have to sniff white out to make an IQ drop
best punch of keyed's verse

keyed half assed it. and eye had a few really gay concepts, but those two quotables won it for him.

vote - eye q

Feel you, I took it in my verse I had 7 bars, but some people get technical and like to count the little lines in between..just didn't want to get caught in any technicality..

Good drop..looking for votes.

You're embarrasing, with those lines your forcing..
Man..This dude has been wacked since birth..
Just like his foreskin..

vs

you're an idiot, and you think people like you? NOT
'n I don't have to sniff white out to make an IQ drop
hes no star, so what kind of idiot found dude?
he should for the hills,
but his fat ass will prolly end up rollin' down it too

ok battle. nothing really stood out...Im guessing Eye Que is a topical head because his style isn't much at battling and he still puts ...'s at the end of his bars. Dont do that, it looks newbish man. Keyed had some ok lines too but he really needs to proof read and check his wording. He missed a few key words in his verse that made it harder to read for me. But he came out on top in quotes and punches so...

V/ Keyed

RTF in my battle vs N. Tavarez please

__________________
figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

you're an idiot, and you think people like you? NOT
'n I don't have to sniff white out to make an IQ drop
but this kid beat me? pffft come on now, please
I mean EVERYONE knows Eye's cornea than me

vs

You're embarrasing, with those lines your forcing..
Man..This dude has been wacked since birth..
Just like his foreskin..

this was a decent battle, keyed verse was simple and to the point, seemed keyed almost, while eye-que DOES seem like he's a topical head cuz his verse showed he has writing skills but just need to polish up his bars and avoid typical concepts
but ok read by both
v/ keyed
rtf on champship like indeath says

I got Keyed winning of the stregth of IQ & cornea. Pretty solid nameplays. Eye had some good attempts but just didn't do any damage. The foreskin was pretty decent but aside from tat it was lacking.

Vote: Keyed

Word thanks for the votes. I'll return later.

3-1

Listen..Ya trends out, like low rise jeans and leather..
and I ain't only talking about my verse when I say..
..I'ma Key...10x better..
You're embarrasing, with those lines your forcing..
Man..This dude has been wacked since birth..
Just like his foreskin..

VS.

you're an idiot, and you think people like you? NOT
'n I don't have to sniff white out to make an IQ drop



To be honest, I thought this battle was weak. Rated man, it shows that you ain't battled in a long while. You need to drop the .... at the end of your lines first of all. Also, some of your concepts were played... like the shit/ass line. I have no idea how people could have the nerve to quote that bar because it was played to fuck. The opener I felt was a decent nameplay and the foreskin line was pretty decent. Keyed half assed and had nothing that really appealed to me. The IQ line was barely quotable for me, your wording was just too elementary. And what the fuck, that cornea line backfired on you because it was fucking corny as fuck.

V/ - Eye-Que

Feel you, It's been a year since I've battled, and I definitly appreciate the feedback from everyone.

Uppin For More Votes

Listen..Ya trends out, like low rise jeans and leather..
and I ain't only talking about my verse when I say..
..I'ma Key...10x better..
You're embarrasing, with those lines your forcing..
Man..This dude has been wacked since birth..
Just like his foreskin..

vs



you're an idiot, and you think people like you? NOT
'n I don't have to sniff white out to make an IQ drop
but this kid beat me? pffft come on now, please
I mean EVERYONE knows Eye's cornea than me


V/keyed....to me i thought ya'll were tie'd in quotes but i felt keyed came with less played shit eye you had alot of shit that was really played an keyed verse overall was more consistent...but good battle ya'll