Check dis

These days is gettin colder
all the wiehgt on my shoulder b like a boulder
wieghin a thounsand pounds look at the sky rain fallin down
as i wonder why i still live to see my life pass me by rain still fallin wish i would die
tryin hard to stay awake makin bills in dis game
i cry when guns bust n shatter the frame
of my brithers no body knows
the pain that grows as i get old
at 16 this scene seems like a dream in the cold
i wait for the day i wake up outta my shell
so i can see the world and its wealth
just let the sun shine one day i'll make up my mind
i pray for time doin crime is not justified
i may be explicit the way i spit n make hits
but i;m like a rock stubborn as fuck wit my eyelids shut
cuz its a hard life every day a struggle n strivin
i stay survivin aven though my destinys thrivin
young thugs risin lookin for a new horizon

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~'LyRiCaLLy UnToPaBlE'~
~FrEe AgeNt~

Ok well... it had a flow to it which was good but try to work on throwing vocabualry in it. OoNnEe

thanks

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~'LyRiCaLLy UnToPaBlE'~
~FrEe AgeNt~

yo... that was tight... I like how you know what you be talkn' buddie is right... work on your vocab babe...

this was a nice drop. good topic, flow was good. keep spittin

also could you peep my shit?http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=39624

good one