walking on an unmarked path
thinking unwanted thoughts.but letting them last
your torturing yourself why not just stop it and think
but your too far down . in deep depression you sink
faster and deeper theres no getting out
like quicksand on your shoulders, instead of sand..fear and doubt
LET GO but you hold on...or getting dragged downwards by mindtreams and letting go of my hand
when we took the vow of marraige...this sort of shit was nt planned
or watchin your child die.........worse than your parents
nothing can sure you from heartache....no rememberence
of good times we had its nothing but nothing-ness
but filled with unhappiness
you cant let yourself go.......unsuccesful in your own mind
time slips by . you grip on....were running out of time

hey girl this was pretty good, the one thing i didnt like was that one really long line but it was still good

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This was good, I liked it. On a side note.. I put the right coding in your sig so you can display pictures, but the links you had for the pictures didn't work for some reason. *shrugs* Anyway, nice poem.

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nice one gurl

nice piece...wish it was longer but it was good.
liked those lines best up there.
had good attitude and emotion to it,keep writing.

one love

nice piece shortie thought this was deep and everything just keep puttin down hottness like this aight
one

holla back at my shit would ya http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=60515

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shut the fuck up

even if i stutter i'll still sh-sh-shit on you/ pun

dead in middle of little of little italy
little did we know that we riddle
some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun