dont listen to the news....


magazine descriptions, gun clips ravage scenes/
victims from Africa to Palestine, pilots scream/
spit ganja, silent beams, violent means/
bomb threats, Khanjar Steps the battles are under depth/
the truth of deciption to move these weapons/
this here is the extensive of you and your enemy/
used to offending me, developing proof of color seperation/
like pictures of booths in Ramallah stations/
its time for Allah, basically given to you/
see its driven to use, manufactured and given to lose/
market social losses, vocal goat carcass/
to the heart like atrichokes, spars are bomb bunkers/
bought mothers for big brothers gone like lost uncles/
all my body Islamic, straight from tendors like Pavoratti/
mocking in trials like Charski, moans of what i'm leakin/
eye beam, i hope you namean like Arabs sleepin/
from what i've seen naturally bottled tears like visine/
dont rot in your fears, you were brought over here/
to brighten the terror of Jahinam caught in mirrors/
prepared to sell your minds for uncivilized lives/
then shack up in homes for nights/
you dont control the time, put your hopes aside/
we factional actional facts wistless/
beat these bastards like fish shit/
last last words i spit this verse to master assumption, over stressed plans/
lets hope you find the truth, while doing your Thing like Gomez humpin his pet hand/
dont let them bother you brother/
dont watch the news, now everybody will suffer/
domes lost to this use like Iraqi troops/
i'm talkin you (who), me and the rest of the planet, to all issues political/
spit a few scourn bone tissues....

hmmm..*strokes beard*....

...an intriguing piece. Some references i had to think about. Maybe you should clarify some of them using '*'.

But yeah, you came well with this. Though at times i felt you overloaded it with references and complexity (the piece couldn't handle it...to heavilt compressed in a 'structure' that wont hold it...)..

still...i felt parts of it quite well. Especially the first four or so lines which were very well put. Using a simple yet effective 'stop-start' style to, er...good effect..

..resp...

not bad

^^^That's a bullshite reply. We see you do it again, we (the mods) will close one of your threads.