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Old 07-07-03, 01:55 PM   #1
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New Shit... Peep this and tell me whachu think

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Aiyyo check this out nigga...

Ima make this shit quik so get off my dick
And quit startin bullshit and tha gun wont click//
Rap Battles? Nah nigga I rip niggaz for fun
I make them leave cryin to let u know that Im done//
Elevatin? Yea nigga Ima keep that in mind
But none of these mahfuckas are "Hard 2 Find"//
ppl say I got a style like "D.R.E." but I
stay tryin'a get wit "B.R.E."//
Vocab? Nah nigga I havent updated It always
stay underrated or overhated//
Complexity? I dunno what dat is but u
can swallow dat shit like its my jizz//
Every girl I know say Ima be da next "50" Im
not a snitch though but I'll write sumthin nifty//
My ratings? Now thats unknown for now until
Im on tv and rippin up "Lil Bow Wow"//
My flows stay wit a fundamental play but
everyday is just an "Elemental" day//
I write gangsta like cause thats my life
And tha next woman I take will be my wife//
Clubs? Yea nigga I hit da hot spots
Like "DJ Coop" mixin wit latina hots//
"DJ Toosheezy" gets all da breezies
This is sum tight shit for all my neezies//
U catch a quik one and end up wit a bruise
Top story "11 News" wit "Della Crews"//
I dont need "Anger Management" for my anger needs
I need a blonde and a false foot like "Mr. Deeds"//
U niggaz need to back up or meet tha shotty
I'll have u all spread out like shit in a potty//
I base my life on a "Ghetto Story" but treat
U niggaz like "Nothin" like im dat nigga "N.O.R.E."//
My "Pride and Glory" is tha only way for
me to succeed and get to tha place I wanna stay//
And thats in tha rap game wit all this fame and
not be put to shame and look like a lame//
I can give u a buzz like a sour "Shock Tart"
then die so u can "Kickstart My Heart"//
New Vocab, More Elevatin, and Complexity
Now Ima make like "Tom Vercetti" and go to "Vice City"

End It....
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Old 07-07-03, 02:00 PM   #2
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datz da best shit ive heard outta u eva
it all fitz n flowz
n it all workz
good shit
keep it up
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Old 07-07-03, 02:09 PM   #3
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<Gangsta One stares in amazment> Whoa........................that was the dopest shi' I have ever seen!!!!!!!!
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Old 07-07-03, 02:21 PM   #4
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shut the fuck up gangsta one, you cock suckin bell end, come and finish of our battle you fuck
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Old 07-07-03, 02:27 PM   #5
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No freepostin man... Uppin for feedback
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Old 07-07-03, 02:47 PM   #6
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wasent feelin this at all, so babdly stands out u tryin ta be somin ya aint
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Old 07-07-03, 02:50 PM   #7
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Actually Im not tryna be nothin. Its just a flow. Just cause u wanna stand out wit ur shit dont mean everybody else has to. But if ur shit so good, how come u aint on tv or nothin? Or u dont have an answer... If not, then shut up and run along and have fun battlin and postin. Uppin for feedback still.
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Old 07-07-03, 02:52 PM   #8
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g u cant take critique, dont fuckin post iight, their was no feelin on dis piece, no wordplay, muiltis,metas or anythin else. period
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Old 07-07-03, 02:53 PM   #9
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i dont agree with any of them
i think you iight ...sound kindalikajuggalo
but its iight that shyt you spit keep spittin nigga
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Old 07-07-03, 02:54 PM   #10
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Yea Ima keep dat up and Zainy, i was just postin sum factual questions thats all. I can take it. If i couldnt I wouldve been gone from this site. Think about it.
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Old 07-07-03, 02:55 PM   #11
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man i just left BRE lmao, u get in easy
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Old 07-07-03, 02:57 PM   #12
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It doesnt matter about gettin in easy. And whats that suppose to mean anyway? And Quit freepostin. Uppin.....
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Old 07-07-03, 03:00 PM   #13
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iight 1 more cus u asked a q, BRE will let ya in easy, they got some of da best emcee's but aint a real crew.
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Old 07-07-03, 03:02 PM   #14
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O ok. Well aight. Uppin.
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Old 07-07-03, 04:33 PM   #15
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Expand on the lines n stuff so u can fit everythin u wanna say in.
Also try to leave the films, games other artists, tv programmes out, its ok usin like 1 a peice but if u throw so many in it looks like a bit immature reflection on u, which is cool if thats what ur style is or whatever.
Oh, and flow was a bit choppy at times but mines shit too but you can always work on it man keep posting one day u'll hit the high note.
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