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07-22-03, 11:53 PM | #1 | ||||||
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getting back in the habit (8 lines, 5 syllable rhymes..)
IP: 0E8F 6A78
my rhymes are hard-to-the-core, like an undrillable mine
i got unstoppable flows, and an unkillable mind you're still a baby emcee, with your umbilical line look at you tryna battle, with your one syllable rhyme frontin like your strapped with guns, like you blast shotty's at night fuck imaginary guns, I use karate to fight I deliver some quick hits, and shock your body with fright Leaving you scared stiff, in the first porto-potty in sight I hadn't written for over a month so I thought I should get back into the habit. For about a year, I think I'm going to try to write a verse or two a week so I don't stay out of practice. Any comments or how to get better would be appreciated. Thanks for reading. -Chris |
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07-23-03, 01:34 AM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: BCA9 9AE3
haha nice
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07-23-03, 04:44 AM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 0E8F 6A78
thanks. i should've put in more than 8 lines, huh? sometimes i just don't feel like writing more than a few lines at a time
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07-23-03, 07:58 AM | #4 | |||||||
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Yeah homie, that shit was pretty dope. Liked the multis and everything, keep it up.
Later, peace. -1-
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