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07-23-03, 01:38 AM | #1 | ||||||
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First Draft Of "Letters Of Goodbye"
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Usually I dont post my first draft of any song, but hey im bored
"Letters Of Goodbye" Lyrics By: A2Z Beat: "Suicide Letters" by Tech N9ne The World Is A Blur-To-Me// The Way-You-Scream Hits Deep In The Heart-Of-Me// Theres Part-Of-Me Thats Losing The Urge-To-Be// Its Like Ever Time-You-Breath You Take A Part-Of Me// Why Cant-You-See Thats-It-Seems Like God Is-Avoiding-Me// I Take A Step-Towards-The-Lord But Demons Keep On-Tormenting-Me// Theres An Uprising-Of-Blashphemy Bubbling At The Core-Of-Me// Now That We Are-No-More Theres No Reason To Live Anymore-For-Me// As-I-Breathe I Can-Feel-Me Edging Ever Closer-To-Catstrophe// The Coward's Way Out, But I Would Have Taken Someone Else-With-me// Take Them-Before-Me, Give-Me A Reason To Not Want-To-Breathe// I Cant Avoid It Anymore, Its Time-For-Me// Its Time To Go-To-Sleep And Live In The Rhelm Of Dark-For-Me// Its Time To Watch-Me-Bleed As I Lay On-The-Floor-As-I-Weep// Say Goodbye-For-Me, Its Done-For-Me Sincerly-A2Z// [hook] [breathy] It slips away.... [background] I can feel it plummet from my fingers theres no reason left for me...im sorry to those ive hurt but it has to be this way [breathy] It slips away... [background] The knife is my relief, as i slice my vein, i know i will meet my fate...im sorry to those ive hurt but it has to be this way [repeat] IM NOT DONE YET, BUT TO THOSE WHO HAVE READ THE INCOMPLETE VERSION GIVE ME FFEDBACK ON THAT! Last edited by A2Z : 07-23-03 at 01:42 AM. |
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07-23-03, 02:04 AM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 399E F0FD
Nice shit right here A2Z...keep spittin man...give me a im...Talk about a crew situation alright
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07-23-03, 02:58 AM | #3 | |||||||
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s'okay lines lenght and flow needs work but it was allright...................
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07-23-03, 08:30 AM | #4 | |||||||
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Very nice drop homie, with some KILLA multis. Keep it up..
Later, peace. -1-
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07-23-03, 11:09 AM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: C1DA C961
yo reach, actually it flows quite nicely iff ya put it to the beat i said
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07-23-03, 12:50 PM | #6 | ||||||
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IP: 2730 01FA
yo thun line for line dat shit was off da meter can't wait to here it on audio or something keep it poppin thun 1
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