REPLIED TOO:
ksmylez- ammunition
Baron Mynd- Weapon Omega. .
Eviley- B.R.E Prezents: Losing your other half...

Divine forces muster plans for some grand design/
Life support distorts, demand overstands the supply/
No one stands at the side of someone on the front lines...
Holdin fort/
Crossbones brand the mind when its crunchtime...
Ball rollin in the court//
So im handlin shots addressed from the famished...
Of any size or sort/
If you tanglin on the block wit tha fresh and candid...
Then you truthfully prize the sport//
And im tryin to cope wit bullshit/
and stomach those who pull it//
If its injected and served by substance abusers/
Gettin rejected and purged like the heimlich manuever//
Brotha my depression resides in the manic/
Stressin on issues seemingly seismic to manage//
The truth moves optimism to a drout/
Dreams diffuse to pessimism cloggin the routes//
Shit Ima realist scriptin lyrics at eighteen/
Christened a pretense when I didnt enlist inta tha mainstream//
And Moms wasnt sad...
When she saw a bad seed in me/
Moms was mad...
When she saw my dad's genes in me//
Its funny most folks...
i meet are ignorant to an extent/
Only privy to the hoax of a sambo...
And dont give two shits about African-Americans//
Vigorously pumpin diesel for a boomin culture/
But history doesnt signal the inhuman torture//
Now that you see the opulence of the tools/
Ya ready ta build houses for 40 acres and the mule//

ya'll know the drill...constructive criticsm is tje name of the game i'll holla back with the flames to ya mainframe at anotha date...latez

I liked this piece fo' real...you had some nice multies up in there son... and I think that the topic was creative... nice drop god...but 1 thing...you ain't gotta put all the other open mics that you repied too...I think the people can figure it out for themselvez...