10 to 20 lines
no crew
hater
or d/r voters
fully explained votes no quoted
no feedoffs
no freeposts
no biting
you spit first

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turning ya ass in 2 MR. split
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ayo when ya laying in ya bed of eternal silence/buried ya six feet deep in the scottish highlands/murdered ya ass brutely by my lyrical voilents/

then a tought comes 2 mind, a moment of wis-dom/well shit son/ u'll never gonna get split like this one/ whatz still 2 come/ A diehard spit that will leave ya ass feeling dumb/

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ya down fall
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now i'm about to finish ya off like ya usto do with mortal-combat/perform a fatality and all that/u bring it cuz i allready got the trap set/ mayn i can tell ya lack in skillz and i haven't even read ya spit yet

in skillz u r lacking/ with rhymez u r wacking/ so why am i attacking a guy who cant stop jurking and jacking/
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putting ya out of ya missery
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i will tread ya like a pond-dog and put ya ass 2 sleep/ like ya can see its pure genius the way i flow 2 this beat/ illrabbit doesnt know the true meaning of defeat/ grap ya fony~ass and slap u of ya feet/ okay mr.spits read this tread but like no doubt u should "dont speak"

aight may twenty lines hope i'm a challenge 4 ya
peace dawg and spit fire

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preperation fo da merk...... fuckit i will merk him now

yo im gonna drop this bitch like a bad ~HABBIT~ wit my lyrical ~CURE~ dats ~PURE~ and ~SURE~ to kill this ~ILLRABBIT~

but my lyrics will absolutly ~CURE UM~ wen my lyrics enter his system wit a deadly lyrical ~SYRUM~ and enters his ~SYSTEM~ and have ya hole crew scared and nobody from rap battles will~MISS UM~ they just gonna say he sucked cause the ~WAY~ he ~CAME~ in this battle cause he has no talent cause Krunk man can ~DISS UM~( krunk mans 0 and 9 and he sucks)

so im gonna end this cause my punchs hittin to hard and i might ~KILL UM~ cause my lyrics are like hollow tips with in 20 seconds i ~WILL FILL UM~

aight we needin some votes holla .................................................. .........................

ayo we uppin fo some votes holla peace .................................................. .......................

uppin fo da 3rd time peeps hit this shit up aight holla at cha boy peace.........................................

Hit this up dogg: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81144

I'd vote on this but as you can see I don't have 100 posts.

aight im uppin fo da 4rth time today please hit this shit up aight niggas we need a winner and a loser holla

Mr.Spits takes this shit more than convincingly,punches were strong, and basically ills punches were none existant

VOTE=Mr.Spits

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sigs are for herbs...Thats why I got one!

aight uppin fo some mo votes nigga holla at dis motha fuckin battle nigga peace .................................

illrabit had sum nice multi's but needs to work on his battling style'very akward and confusing......although he worked the multi's Mr.spits took him in every other category....

my vote- Mr. Spits

Mr spits hit harder with the disses

BUT!!!!!!!!!!!

you're too repetive dawg

you used system twice, dont do that

Vote = Mr Spits

illrabbit need to be more creative on his punches...they really did'nt hit that hard...disses were good..he had a couple played lines...wordplay was mediocre...did'nt come with enuff heat tho

mr. spit had some punches that connected well..even tho his verse was short he hit harder...also had a touch of creativity...nice opener...

vote mr.spit

aight i think MR. Spits won cause he came hard with his punchs i liked his structure he had decint complexity it was a tight ass vers and his beginning was off da hook vote spits if i could vote