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10-28-03, 05:31 PM | #1 | ||||
Straight Savage.
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SS: Swallowed Pride
IP: 8BEC CACE
Swallowed Pride....
I Came, I Saw, I Conquered, What I Thought I Had Known I Thought I Had The Power Over My Evil Feelings, I'm Proned To Feel At Times, When I Didn't Want To Think That Shit My Pride Taking Over My Body, And Ruining My Existence And Until I Knew My Other Half Would Finally Lose A Battle I Had To Live With My Pride, Wait Until It Died, It Had To... Foolishness, I'm On Top Of The World, As Far As I Can See And There is Not Another Soul On This Planet, Defeating Me Sure I May Cloud Your Judgement, But I'm Strong As It Is You Swallowed Me In A Glass Jar, Like Blowjobs and Kids But...You Are Unable To Understand, The Full Extent Of Power I Pormised Happiness, But Pain And Suffer By Me Will Shower And People Will Know Who I Am,History, Not A Face in The Books Because My Power is Inevitable, When Its Done, The Earth Shooked What I Don't Get, Is Why Your Here, As Much As I Regret You Think You Lead Me To The Top, But We Are The Bottom Yet You Think That You Have Taken Over, All of What My Body Controls Like There Is No Use For Me, But I Am The Conscience, The Soul You Are Just A Subdivision Of ME!! As Much As You don't want to Hear It You Are Just An Unecessary Factor, And One I Can Easily Give My Riddings You Are Nothing, Your Not a Power Of A Whole Extent Of Rage Your Something Thats Created, And Animal Let Out its Cage Because I Gave Birth To Pride, Another Feeling, Hard To Resist But You Lost, Swallowed YourSelf, And Then Ceased To Exist.
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10-28-03, 06:08 PM | #2 | |||
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This was hot. the flaw was good. you used a good variety of imagery. I'm pretty sure your opponet will have a challenge with your entry keep spittin.
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10-29-03, 08:31 PM | #3 | ||||
Straight Savage.
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IP: 8BEC CACE
Upp
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10-30-03, 04:13 PM | #4 | ||||||
Flyweight
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Sube Parriba
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Pro.Fess.In.All and that...is cool. SkiddZ posts here too, motherfuckas..
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10-30-03, 04:31 PM | #5 | ||||||
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ill piece, tight imagery, tight rhyme scheme, good vocab, it flowed well, it was structured good, easy to read, it stayed on point, and all in all this piece was an enjoyable read.keep droppin tha hotness.~1~
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10-30-03, 06:18 PM | #6 | ||||
Straight Savage.
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IP: 8BEC CACE
Dope!!!!!!
And UP!
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10-30-03, 06:39 PM | #7 | |||||||
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Re: SS: Swallowed Pride
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10-30-03, 07:13 PM | #8 | ||||||
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damn nigga skrait piece fuh realz dun ill flow vocab nice emotions pretty good imaginary persective wus decent juss overall bomb ass drop nigga stay ^
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10-30-03, 09:58 PM | #9 | ||||
Straight Savage.
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IP: 8BEC CACE
^who you callin Nigga?
Anyways..Up
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10-31-03, 01:51 PM | #10 | ||||
Straight Savage.
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IP: 8BEC CACE
up
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10-31-03, 02:11 PM | #11 | ||||
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Hot
Dope immagery Nice vocab and flow, ...stayed good on topic, ... Nice read
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10-31-03, 02:19 PM | #12 | ||||||
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I love that shit Ill imagery and vocab
All n All this shit was tite |
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10-31-03, 02:46 PM | #13 | ||||||
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Strengths: You had a really good soild flow.
You alos had deep deep meaning. Another note on flow-HOT! Weaknesses: More unique Topic Advice: Just keep doing what your doing, get a very unique topic next time, but overal it was really good.
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10-31-03, 06:41 PM | #14 | ||||
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downing
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