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11-07-03, 10:22 PM
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IP: CB38 DF07
replied to set-ignorance, and angellicalR...+ a few more that I can't remember off the dome...I'll put em up in a minute...
I'm bored...so I felt like doin a quick keystyle...lemme know what u think...the topic is just thinkin of the funniest/siccest shit possible I make more noise than R Kelly in a room full of 14 year old boys// my rapskills is harder than tryna get the raspy out of lil jon's voice// I got kat's shakin like sex toys, when I'm rippin n slittin the wrists of these bitches// fidget when I'm fuckin a midget, pick up the misfit by the bitches armpits n open the clit n stick my dick in it!// no wonder man, kids don't understand the siccness in my technique// when u homo's see guys u squirtin white liquid like bitches that breastfeed// I put on the best scene, like 2 lesbians on stage humpin each other to death G// raps so hot I could cover em in dog shit and vomit and ya bitch would still find em sexy!// like sleepy little children you'll find yaself "kid-napped" wake up, get ya shit clapped// look in the mirror see that ya face is red from the bitchslaps// u kid's wack, think u got balls, wind up with a slit-sack// for fuckin with a rapper tighter than a virgins clit-crack// I'm conversatin with a female that never heard-of-you-while// I insert my penis in ya girlfriends VERTICLE SMILE!!!!! lmao....just some off the head kinda shit.... peace |
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11-08-03, 02:30 PM
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IP: 954A E2C5
hahahahahahaha lol
funniest verse i've ever seen but elevate your flow a lil! 7/10 keep droppin, you have potentials |
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11-08-03, 02:33 PM
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IP: 954A E2C5
return tha favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89596 |
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11-08-03, 05:16 PM
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IP: 19AF 50C1
this was helleraious but elivate structure
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11-08-03, 08:19 PM
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IP: B157 F101
yea that was some funny shit...flow was pretty good, structure could have been better....vocab was good....content was good and made me laugh....overall it was a nice drop....just work on your structure some and you should be set....
oh yea if you get a chance could you check out my latest open mic and hit me up with some feedback.... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89818 -1- |
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11-08-03, 10:48 PM
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IP: 32D9 0BD3
Your length is a little long..you need to give better hits with shorter ryhmes..keep up the good work..peace
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11-08-03, 11:04 PM
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IP: CB38 DF07
^ yea i feel u man that verse wasn't serious at all..I rewrote most of it n turned it into a recorded track today....the flow was off cuz it was written without a beat in like 7 minutes...just a quick key basically...but thanx for the props on the humor n shit...that's basically what I wrote it for was the jokes..I'll hit up ya'lls shit too
peace
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