MenTiLL:


Marie ... That was her name So many time I used it in vain
And the pain I gave her so much ... Sheets - Blood stained
I came and went ... But she took it like I was only cheatin'
I was pussy whipped ... Simply speakin - While bein' beatin'
Hungryness often lead to eatin' ... But rarely did it happen
Moanin' and gaspin' ... Action ... Balls and lips started clappin'
Smashin' ... In a sense ... But yes I did tell her I loved her
Usually I was above her ... Too lazy - So she put on the rubber
After I rubbed her ... But a while before me and her combusted
Yes I busted ... In a Trojan - I found out Lifestyles couldn't be trusted
Ketchup and mustard came next ... Yea it was kind of sticky
But at the time I was too broke ... To have the mind to be picky
Get me? Some of you will ... Some won't ... It all depends
I'd tell U more of the story ... If I didn't wake up before the end
But she was my friend ... The girl in my dreams ... Often wore pink lipstick
So the next day I gave her a call and left a message statin' :
"Excuse me miss ... We have some unfinished business"

Time To Switch It Up A Bit.

ExXoDuS:



it started when i was eleven, thought it was heaven, but hell approached//
i was geeky as fuck...gettin beat up...aimin to tell the coach//
but my mellow showed.....and i was easily mispredicted//
and my coach said i was lying, so he quickly dismissed it//
“you didn’t see the marks on my wrist bitch!”..he replied with grabbin my shirt//
his inner demons steadily screamin....”why are you after this jerk”//
"is it because he doesn’t like you.....so you lie and say he fights you”//
“you keep on with these fables and i’ll make it so you need night school”//
“nah i’m cool”.....i jerked from his grasp....then reworded the past//
so it didn’t look as if i was tattered from this jerk hurtin my ass//
3 years went by, constant pain and steady suffering//
duckin, hidin, runnin....anything to avoid another knuckling//
one day i finally snapped.....jerked his spine through his back//
chopped his body up...hackin while i’m laughin...they aint findin this cat//
but before i took his life.........i was puntin the kick in....//
his brain box......and screamed “you fuckin bully...now let’s settle unfinished business//

DoPeYz.

different, but ok--keep doin ya thang

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^so true.. Lifestyles break like fuck..

nice lil piece here.. like D. said this is very different from the norm.. but cool cause i like different..

Thanx Man. Uppin For Replies.

Uppin For Some Feedback Please.

This came out pretty dope Exx ... I liked ur take on the topic ... Thanks for the replies peeps ... Uppin' this for some more feed back ... Peace

this was koo, unfinished business and such, ha, girl trouble and school days... respect, nice styles from both, mostly a good read too, keep writin'


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Uppin again ... Peace

yo nyce aiight i'd give it 7/10 allround an average peice

yo could u check this shit out
Have You Ever Had....