i dunno what i was on when i wrote this (but it wasn't drugs) lol

Through out history, mans great mystery
From continent to continent A recipe for hypocrisy
A multitude of killin The worlds biggest villain
Continuously fed ignorance and blood spillin//
Kill more people than AIDS~And more people than raid
In combat by troops with explosive hand grenades
So people hold poisonous snakes in his name
So people like to concentrate and self inflict pain//
Emaculation brought on decapitation
Situations unbearable for human habitation
Devastation rain from nation to nation
A fool with a cause equals self-defecation//
Blind to the facts when reality attacks
Just turn your back, mumble some words then relax
Proud of what you say? But you act a different way
Keep on judging others and your pain will go away//
Raise your children wrong with exception strong
And they'll walk a crooked path difficult and long//
To declare it and understand incoherent
Leaves a person the weakness despite transparent
Take a look around you not just in the front
Watch ya pockets real close and beware of a skun//
All the dark secrets built up for a while
Can be hidden on Sunday with a suit and a smile


In the past, nothing stood in its path
Even women and children felt the wrath of the bloodbath
Believe what I believe or face death
If you disagree then you'll have no face left
That was a sentence; ultimate and it was repentant
Become a mortar and be buried in the trenches
The same tradition that's carried on today
But instead of blades swinging, bullets ricochet
Anti abortion advocates throw pipe bombs
While the ignorant gather to worship icons
No independent thought; sanctity bought
At the price of a life and they thankfully fought
Robots in the light, programmed to recite
Words that'll make the dog night run in fright
This thing is very dangerous when in the wrong minds
And evidence finds that this shit easily blinds
In the human existince, take death for instance
The topic of discussion can shorten the distance
Be careful of the food you bite
And when digestin it, keep your own thoughts in sight
Puppets move by a common thread
Never taken the time to let thought in the head
Instead, eatin all the bullshit they fed

Thats why nintey-percent of the world is mentally dead*

some shyt on my dame ya feel...

i replied to

rule (weather art)
B.I. (Nuclear Concepts)
Mental God (Historical moments)

This was dope
I liked the vocab in the first line(Or attempt at it)
You need to lengthen your bars a little
Flow was there mos def
Nice topic
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YEAH DUNNY THANX... i'm just tryin to see what style i should work out with ... i like this style of keystylin... but i like my other style better... but thanx yo

UPPIN

Plz return the favor on my piece
"What Has Happened To HipHop"

This was pretty good, It was fun to read cause your topics were everywhere LOL. Flow fell off a couple times, But im feeling this hommie. Nice Drop...
UPPIN

OUT

-High Class a.k.a Confusion

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Yeah this was a alright piece here....structure seemed pretty good in this i thought, could be touched up a bit here and there though....but your vocab was pretty nice in this also....flow was alright, fell off at some points in this though....but overall a alright drop here...keep at it.

THANX YALL... i'mjust tryin to keep elevating...

UPPIN

Caesar on3

i like it even tho u seemed to go off on weird subjets it was still good

i liked the topic the flow was real hard to follow for me though needeed more internals and multis in my opinion. but the detail was good and in depth

thanx yall... showin the love... UPPIN

this all the love i get???......................................iight. ..

Caesar on3

I see you have done a lot of elevatin since me and u battled. Nice shit u got here man. I'll give ya ur rematch soon. Ive been busy producin. But otha than that, Nice work MD. Peace.

Through out history, mans great mystery
From continent to continent A recipe for hypocrisy

/\did not rhyme

flow fell off a lot...choppy
vocabulary seemed forced at times...
long read that bored me a lot make them shorter
metaphors you must improve

overall...ok drop i guess

^^^^^^^^^^^
punch to the gut

But thanx yall.... mo love.. uppin