Collab w/ A friend GangstaGurl freom another site

check it... kinda long


Flow Intelligent: What the hell are u doin?
GangstaGurl: Look, i cant handle this anymore... listen to me.


(GangstaGurl)
Now I love you more then life and itself - but im feelin frighten as hell-
Like its never the right time for this..well- i got shit i been dyin to tell-
Sometime its like i been put right in a cell- u just tryin to lock me down-
Saying u got to make a stop in town -or was it just to block me out-
How long does it take to shop around? - stop with them lying words-
No reason to hide ya dirt cuz from what i heard u wasnt just tryin to flirt-
Dosnt seem like cryin works- sad cuz i ate alone n u just aint at home-
I call ya cell just to hang the phone- no way u can blame me tho-
Talk to me or is it sumthin i'd hate to know- damn, im not dumb-
Checkin ya undawear jus to spot cum- hmm..so what u got hun?-
Said u had to stop at the store or hav u 4got stuff?- fuccin liar-
Betta learn from Kanya befa ya jaw get stuck in wires- im done..retired-
Cant take no more -the feel of u cheatin is becomein higher -u started shit-
Me findin a thong in the glove compartment is just one part of this argument-
I dont wanna take this any futher then- baby, tell me the real truth-
I cant handle that i feel used- im jus a lil confused- am i wut u still choose-
Thought i was the only one to appeal u- I thought cupid finaly had one-
Or was i stupid cuz an arrow cant trap love- Flow tell me we still have us-
Tell me NOW -cuz i DONT find packin bags fun- u got 10 min left to talk-
I neva said its ya fault, its me, so im sayin Bye..-i think its best that i walk..-


(Flow Intelligent)
i never wanted ta lock u down, or mentaly toss you around
shit, at first i didnt know what u ment, but i got you now
id never block you out, im jus so fuckin busy baby
and u know, when i roll, all my business is crazy
but tha vibe im gettin is shady, u listenin to them stupid birds
spittin gossip, bout who i was "caught wit", or where im doing dirt
like all i do-is-flirt, thats some useless words, tho you know what
i always knew, it was you, that called jus to hang tha phone up
girl we both grown-ups, its so fucked, i did nothing regardless
of what you found, any time u snooped around, in tha glove compartment
look what tha fuck im charged-with, your friends is some wretched sleuths
there mad, of what we have, i know you can see there jealous to
i mean i been thru hell-wit-you, yet you still never acted mad
till i come, like "what tha fuck', why is she packing bags
girl im not laughin back, we can talk unless tha shits finished
but dont threaten me, saying ive only got ten minutes
and then tha shits ended, or u gona go where your bitch-friends-is
its like what u used to feels diminished, now u walkin quick
u jus like "so what", easy to give up, and jus fuckn call it quits


(GangstaGurl)
Stop callin my friends bitches- least they kno where they fuckin men is-
I cant tell when my man been-shit! - so they aint fuccin snitches-
They can be in our bizness - so tell me baby whats ya excuse-
Im not tryin to test u but tell me sumthin befo the door is my nex route-

(Flow Intelligent)
put them in check too, they fuckin low down and trife
and please, cuz there shits about me, so now its right?
u wanna be with out it fine, ive given your ass trust
but fuck, no matter what, its always been about us

(GangstaGurl)
was u thinkin about us too - when u left me to be above who?-
Man i gave u trust too even when u was with ya thuged crew-
But ill put the box glove thru any girl that fuccin touched you-
Turn her lungs blue and sore her throat till it look like her tongue grew-


(Flow Intelligent)
so whats new, its not like i slug dudes, with your flirting shit
or crush, all them fucks, you claim you "working wit"
but concerning this, remember i'll always respect you though
but im confused, should i be through, and just up and let you go

(GangstaGurl)
Truthfully, i cant let u go- then id be giving u to one of these vet freak ho's-
Me really leave? the answer just be no - our love cant be thrown-
Id be stoned if i put this to rest and hold - sorry for bein upset and trippin-
But i be feelin a threat to rippin a bitch chest, but me leavin was my last intention-


(Flow Intelligent)
good then the trash is ended, im glad its done too
i know it can be hell, but your the only female, theres nobody but you
hopefuly we can run through, all the drama we fucking attract
but im grateful, i need you here so let me help you unpack

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RV's Only 3 Time Topical Tourney Champion

upping for feedback

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RV's Only 3 Time Topical Tourney Champion

Damn... Fucking Fire... 10/10... GangstaGirl... First time i've read anything from you... Where you been? Damn... Nice verse... Flow... Great job also... I loved how you each got one long verse, and then switched off, like a rhyming conversation... Perfect... 10/10...

thanks for the feedback uppin

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RV's Only 3 Time Topical Tourney Champion

OM of december...that shit was HOT....10/10 by far....the flow...the rhyme scheme...everything was pearl....awesome story line...ur layout of the spits makes it the best...this shit had me goin....peep my link in the sig flow...but this shit was insanely ill

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That Old School Mother Fucker

Aint That A Bitch?

Crhyme Sindicate

Nominating this shit man...Both verses were vicious...Flowed perfect...feeling the lil cypher or whatever u wanna call it between u 2...nice shit...10/10...1

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yo.....this was FFFFFIIIIIIIRRRREEEEE.....10/10....i love the plot....this shits gone be OM of december....this needs to be an audio...wonder wut it'll sound like

return tha favor in my battle vs infector mindz
and my open mic called "empty bootlez"


peesh

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Haha thanks for all the feedback it would be good to win that OM award tho

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RV's Only 3 Time Topical Tourney Champion

wow...nice shit mayn..
..prolly took a long-ass time
to think of that or sumthin
9.5/10

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..The Council..
7 Day Theory

DAMN DAT WAS TIGHT I LIKED DA WAY YALL
SWITCHED UP AND PUT UR CONVERSATION
INTO YA RAP DAT WAS HOTT...RETURN DA FAV.
IN MY NEW POST "dis is how i feel"plzz...holla

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Damn freaken flow, you always gotta have hot verses everytime you drop!!! Shyt!! lol this was a pretty good piece, the multi's was hot, flow was okay, structure good, but really, it was hard for me to feel the emotion on this one..sorry

9/10

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Oh and please return the favor to any of my poems thanx

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Creative, *applause* Nice topic everything was focused nice, the content--oooooo.... this screams open mic of December hands down, unless sumbody got riders for next month already.. ... but still shit u got my vote and it's only the beginning of the month... dayum, *reads it again*........ i say 10.9/10 ...... that dayum good, very nice to know you with mab, shit u got skillz in all blockz, keep holding it down.... holla at me fa a collab sum time...... Put this on audio, aiyo mi familia..
pz........ MAB muthafukkas!!!

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