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^Click on "Can't hold me"


Beat: Low Profile, or w/e they're called

Intro Clip: From the movie "Signs"

Hook: All Q

Verses: 1-3 Q

Ending: Sorry, I lost it.

Concept: Imagine that everyone you've ever met in your life didn't exist, but was created in your mind.



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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238887
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238893

hahah... ur concept is like A Beautiful Mind

this vibe is perfect on the hook... with the beat... really feelin that openin.... most people dont get the vibe right just try and flow nice and make good lines... ur flow is real nice on this shit... i liek the contrast of the verse and the hook... def sounds mixed differently too

verse 2 has a decent story on it..... some nice lyrics, but not much to say about it cusz im tryin to pay attention... hook is fuckin sick as ive sed for this beat..... u can fit the melody of it pretty well.... this track is ur best in a while man.... good u repeated the hook at the end, really couldnt get enough of it... u shouldve prolly done some adlibs in the last hook for alil switch up

.... god damn, u spent alotta time it seems perfectin this track mixin wise... its CRAZY SON.... i think this might ur best put together song ever..... props, mad props on bein an ARTIST, not just a rapper. 1

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I liked this, alot...

Nice flow, but I really liked the concept, you know, no more gun rap, just deep shit about life and God... I feel it...

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Wow I've never heard you pace ya voice like that before. smooth kind a singing type thing on the hook word i liked it. I love your idea for this track man thats insane. your flow is fuckin hot like it usually is. Quality is back up word! I'm lovin ya delivery on this joint. The ebat is fuckin killa kinda like some common sense shit i got my my pc. shits dope im lovin this track, yo ima download it haha.

rtf here man: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238838

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Thats wsup q this is probably one of your fav tracks for me to listen to the opening hook sets the tone from the jump makes u wanna take a seat and enjoy the ride...the voice you used and the mixing for the hook just grasps the listener to feel the emotion the verse kinda jumps out at ya after being lullabyed by the hook but listening to the werds intertwined with this beat really flows the second verse flew in a bit more smooth here lyrics were moving towards that more and more people in and out shit.....ok third verse time to tie it up an explain the theory here definate outsretched imagination for this whole track if half the kids had your creative abilty and thought process to hit a track the rap game would be bannanaz.............................

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Listenin...

Verse is crazy...wow...flow is real dope...and lyrics is real..I know the abuse shit and who u was talking 2..and we over that but ima publically apologize cos i told u shit we were wildin out..this shit is real the bobby lines...hook is hot too..i like the style on here..shit is real..last verse is hot aswell multis are good..that's all i gota say hot track..1

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You have improved so much from the last track I heard of yours. This song has a real polished, professional vibe to it.

The beat is ill, and your flow suits it real well. Lyrics are solid, the hook is good... It's a very good track.

Did you want me to leave feed or an opinion on the concept? In a way it's probably more true than you think.

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^^What was the last song of mine u heard? man...

come on...this is 2007!

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lol, it was probably years ago.. -_-

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^^Come on man!








word....preciate the nod tho...


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